Baldrick_Alpha Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 [i do not own the artwork used for my cards. I only use them as a means of increasing the overall quality and effect of my work. I do not claim ownership of them.] - All art is to be found on http://ajax.sagubooru.com/alas, it don't say who the art belongs to. Ok guys this is my first attempt at making a card, what do you all think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drazalon Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 hmmmm not bad at all. i like the description, and great picture that matches nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 um theres just something about the way its written thats a little iffy to merating7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 i like it good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 Its not bad, tis a little basic though, still nice effort, well done. ^_^7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 well i liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 9/10 + New Member effort = 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BurmysRUs Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 That is really good for a new member! Just a bit of capitalization problems. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 "When an opponent's monster attacks you directly, destroy it with this card's effect. You take damage equal to half the destroyed monster's ATK."It's not bad, and it's excellent for your first card. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lurker77 Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Lots of capitilization errors, and it's 100% inferior to Draining Shield 5/10 for art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 It's really good for your first card, 8/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Its good for your first card :)7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Geo55 Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 i like stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slade Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Hmm... they're just a combination between Dimension Wall and Sakuretsu Armor (well, somewhat a combination). Nice try, though. 8/10. Also, it shouldn't be a counter trap. Counter traps are only used to negate other card's effects. This doesn't negate an effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 ocg errors. good idea. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baldrick_Alpha Posted March 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 i see, well thanks for all the comments and tips for future cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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