Ren✧ Posted June 17, 2013 Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 Banish 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard. When your opponent activates a card or effect that would target and/or Special Summon a monster in the Graveyard: You can banish this card in your Graveyard; negate the activation and banish the card. [hr] The immorality of bringing back what has already passed reaps the intervention of a higher power. [hr] I kinda just made this off a whim. The OCG and wording of the card is difficult, so any help there would be appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 17, 2013 Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 So it is basically a conditional, on the field D.D. Crow that has a D.D. Crow effect when destroyed. Crow is far better than this card, as are any hand traps better then their Trap Card counterparts. Breakthrough Skill is still weaker then Veiler, even with its Graveyard activation (excluding situations with Zenmaines/Utopia, etc.). I think perhaps this card should take a page out of that card's book, meaning do what the Hand Trap does, and still have some use afterwards. Perhaps make the first activation outright banish a card in the graveyard, then when in the graveyard you can banish it to negate a card that targets a card in the graveyard. Basically, flip the effects around and change "When destroyed" to "Banish this card in your Graveyard". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 So it is basically a conditional, on the field D.D. Crow that has a D.D. Crow effect when destroyed. Crow is far better than this card, as are any hand traps better then their Trap Card counterparts. Breakthrough Skill is still weaker then Veiler, even with its Graveyard activation (excluding situations with Zenmaines/Utopia, etc.). I think perhaps this card should take a page out of that card's book, meaning do what the Hand Trap does, and still have some use afterwards. Perhaps make the first activation outright banish a card in the graveyard, then when in the graveyard you can banish it to negate a card that targets a card in the graveyard. Basically, flip the effects around and change "When destroyed" to "Banish this card in your Graveyard". Thanks for the review! How is it now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 17, 2013 Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 I don't see a point in "When this card is activated", as it would clearly do what it says when it is activated. Wouldn't it be better to not include that first part, just say, "Banish 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard."? Away from nitpicking, it is much better in my opinion, and maybe three bumps later you can hear some other person's opinion (bum dmm tsss!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 I don't see a point in "When this card is activated", as it would clearly do what it says when it is activated. Wouldn't it be better to not include that first part, just say, "Banish 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard."? Away from nitpicking, it is much better in my opinion, and maybe three bumps later you can hear some other person's opinion (bum dmm tsss!) Change made. And you aren't kidding. Not too many reviewers around, although I guess I partly contribute to that as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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