BassCuciDela Posted June 23, 2013 Report Share Posted June 23, 2013 CnC ALWAYS welcome and i hope u like the cards Sea Spike Dragoon: Once per turn if you control a face up dragon type monster other than this card change it's attribute to water. all water attribute dragon type monsters on the field gain 300 attack points. Lady Dragon Spirit of the Sea: by removing from play one dragon type monster in your graveyard you can special one dragon type monster of the same attribute to the field. you cannot declare a direct attack with monsters summoned by this cards effect. Deep Sea Dragon Sage: "Lady Dragon Spirit of the Sea" + "Sea Spike Dragoon" When this monster is summoned select a water attribute spellcaster or dragon type monster in either graveyard; special summon it to the field in face up defense position Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Kisumi-nee Posted June 23, 2013 Report Share Posted June 23, 2013 Review: Sea Spike Dragoon - 1st, the stats of this monster seems to be too low for a Level 5 monster. You can make it Level 4 (I actually think you mistakenly made it Lvel 5). Wording error too. Should be: " Once per turn, if you control a face-up Dragon-type monster on the field other than this card: You can change its attribute to WATER. All WATER attribute dragon-type monsters on the field gain 300 ATK. Lady Dragon Spirit of the Sea- I noticed capitalization errors on this card and also You seem to forgot to mention from where the Special Summoned monster will come from and I think you need to limit the special summoning of this card from your hand.It also lacks a limit to how many times you can activate its effect. Suggestive: "Once per turn,you can remove from play 1 dragon-type monster from your graveyard: Special Summon 1 Dragon-type monster of the same attribute from your hand. Monsters Special Summoned by this effect cannot declare a direct attack. Deep Sea Dragon Sage- Wording change to: "When this monster is summoned: Select 1 WATER attribute Spellcaster or Dragon type monster in either player's graveyard; Special Summon it to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 23, 2013 Report Share Posted June 23, 2013 Sea Spike Dragon I agree with the suggest that this could become a Level 4 monster by simply reducing its ATK by 100 and DEF by 200, you could easily make this card much more playable. As it is now, however, it is not worth the trouble to bring out. The effect is rather weak too, but I like the idea behind it. Provided more support, it could be interesting. I wouldn't mind if it could change anything, not just Dragons, into WATER. That way, it could work with things like Genex. "Once per turn, you can target 1 other Dragon-Type monster you control: That monster's Attribute is changed to WATER. WATER Dragon-Type monsters you control gain 300 ATK." Lady Dragon Spirit of the Sea Nasty. I guess this could make same Attribute Dragon Decks have even more support, but really, Dragon's don't need support, especially not in this manner. I suggest negating the effect of the Summoned monster, as well as Special Summoning it in Defense Position (which would allow you to remove the can't attack directly clause). Banishing a dead Eclipse Wyvern to return a Blue-Eyes would be a tad too good for a Level 3 monster. This would help balance it out to an extent. I'll include a version of fixing for your card aswell as my final suggestion on what it should become. Your card fix: "Banish 1 Dragon-Type monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster with the same Attribute from the Graveyard. You cannot attack directly the turn you activate this effect." (NOTE: Too OP) My suggestion: "Once per turn: You can banish 1 WATER Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard. You cannot attack directly the turn you activate this effect." Deep Sea Dragon Sage I really like this card, and makes for graveyard shenanigans with CotH/Monster Reborn similar to how Darklord Superbia does. Nice, sweet, and too the point effect that is still good. I could see where you wouldn't want to negate the effect of the Summoned monster when using Lady Dragon Spirit. If you really want to make Lady Dragon Spirit work with this guy, I suggest simply sticking to WATER Attribute Dragons, or banishing only WATER Attribute Dragons to Special Summon from the Graveyard. "When this card is Summoned: Target 1 WATER Dragon or Spellcaster-Type monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon it in Defense Position." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BassCuciDela Posted June 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2013 Sea Spike Dragoon the dragon/spellcaster deck i'm building works only with water attribute dragon type and spellcaster type monsters monsters. to decrease the chance that his effect which empowers all dragons could aid my enemy i added that they must also be water attribute. but i can see what u mean and yes lvl 5 was error. Lady Dragon Spirit of the Sea instead i'll have it summon a dragon type of the same level since all my dragons will be water type either way. Deap Sea Dragon Sage i tried to really make him powerful and useful considering he's a fusion summon and those take time to bring out. in any event both of your suggestions were helpful. i'm most definitely going to be editing the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted June 24, 2013 Report Share Posted June 24, 2013 Dual-Types are NOT realistic. Moved to Any Other Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BassCuciDela Posted June 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2013 really? then how do you explain beast-warrior which are DUAL archetypes. your statement= invalid bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted June 26, 2013 Report Share Posted June 26, 2013 Beast Warriors aren't a dual type as they do not get Beast or Warrior support. Try again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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