My deck

[Syncopation]

This focuses on bringing out Xyz monsters quickly. There are a few synchros in the mix to help with that.Tell me what you think...

 

Level 3-

2 Tune Warrior

2 Marauding Captain

2 Level Warrior

2 Gagaga Girl

Level 4-

2 D.D. Assailant

2 Goblinbergh

2 Gagaga Magician

1 Summoner Monk

2 Mystic Tomato

Level 8- 

1 Beast King Barbaros 

Spells- 

2 The Warrior Returning Alive

2 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Reinforcements of the Army

1 Book of Moon

1 Swords of Revealing Light

1 Monster Reborn

1 Scapegoat

Traps- 

1 Ultimate Offering

1 Wakobu

1 Scrap Iron Scarecrow

2 Call of the Haunted

2 Magical Cylinder

1 Solemn Judgment

1 Dark Bribe

1 Dimension Slice

2 Utopian Aura

Total: 40

Extra Deck:

1 No. 61

1 No.C39

3 No. 39

1 No. 33

1 No. 20

1 No. 17

1 No. 6

1 No. 11

3 Gaia Knight, the Force of Earth

2 X Saber Urbellum

[Toffee.]

This focuses on bringing out Xyz monsters quickly.

See, here's the issue here-
While your implying it's meant to spam Xyzs, it's just not focused enough, let alone actually consistent, to achieve such a goal.

I mean, if you want to make the deck Gagaga-based, as that's the vibe I get from this, then don't even need things like Level Warrior, Marauding Captain, etc, etc. Hell, you don't even have Mystic Tomato, which, by default, can search for either Magician OR Girl.

[Syncopation]

See, here's the issue here-
While your implying it's meant to spam Xyzs, it's just not focused enough, let alone actually consistent, to achieve such a goal.

I mean, if you want to make the deck Gagaga-based, as that's the vibe I get from this, then don't even need things like Level Warrior, Marauding Captain, etc, etc. Hell, you don't even have Mystic Tomato, which, by default, can search for either Magician OR Girl.

I added 1 "Summoner Monk" and 2 "Mystic Tomato" in place of 1 "Level Warrior ", 1 Marauding Captain", and 1 "D.D. Assailant". Does that help at all? 

[Toffee.]

Yea, it's getting there. You still have a lot of unnecessary cards.
Like, for example:

2 Tune Warrior
2 D.D. Assailant
1 Beast King Barbaros 
1 Scrap Iron Scarecrow
2 Magical Cylinder
1 Dimension Slice
2 Utopian Aura

These don't really contribute to anything.

....
Wait, it this deck IRL?

[Syncopation]

Yea, it's getting there. You still have a lot of unnecessary cards.
Like, for example:These don't really contribute to anything.

....
Wait, it this deck IRL?

IRL?? And what is wrong with "Utopian Aura"?  

[Toffee.]

IRL?? And what is wrong with "Utopian Aura"?  

IRL means "In real life". As in, if this is a deck of cards you actually own, then a lot of it will make more sense to Me.
Also, fine, you can keep Aura if it's a personal choice.