Helia

[Squirrel Girl]

Well, my first card in a while so please give me advice on how to improve.

 

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This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no battle damage from battles involving this card. When this card is Summoned: Target 1 monster on the field; that monster cannot attack. When this card is destroyed: Destroy the targeted monster and inflict damage to both players equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x 200.

 

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Well, hope you like and pls give advice

[Kyng's Old Account]

Nice to see a veteran make a card now and again!
 
Obviously, this card has a lot of support going for it (what with being able to be recovered with Recurring Nightmare, target-able by and benefiting from Limit Reverse, etc. That's nice for it, it can be used in a pretty versatile way. It also has sound protection through immunity of battle destruction and damage, the stats of course compensate for this. You could also make some fun little shindigs with cards like Interdimensional Matter Transporter.
 
The later effect can be improved to make this more competitive, in my opinion. If you change it from "When this card is destroyed" to "When this card would be destroyed"  and allow the targeted monster to take the destruction instead, you make this much more playable, since the double burn to both players would be fine if you allowed the targeted monster to scapegoat this card's destruction. It'd further oomph this card's wall abilities.

 

I don't see much flavour for the card, what inspired you to make this?

 

I like this card. It doesn't need to be competitive to be good, and this card is all around pretty fun.

[Squirrel Girl]

Thanks for the feedback and whatnot.

 

Haven't actually been active in the Yu-Gi-Oh field for a while, so I just wanted to see if my old Card Making abilities was still there. Will probably make some more solos and then go over to a Set.