Cardkeybrian Posted July 18, 2013 Report Share Posted July 18, 2013 O.k before you look at them please don't stomp on my ideas please :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 18, 2013 Report Share Posted July 18, 2013 Alright, let me just say this in the quickest and easiest way possible; this thread will be locked. It breaks a lot of rules. They're not realistic nor balanced, and they certainly don't belong in Realistic Cards - Single Cards because there are more than one. I suggest you read up real Yu-Gi-Oh cards and look at other member's creations before you post other cards. If you need help, read the RC guide here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/304045-guide-to-the-realistic-cards-single-cards-section/ Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheNextEcho Posted July 18, 2013 Report Share Posted July 18, 2013 it's not like I can talk being a new member myself but that being said, you are clearly some one who needs a lot of practice and instruction, you should go to http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/304045-guide-to-the-realistic-cards-single-cards-section/ I advice you visit this section but this help is limited, I may not be a expert but if you want some guidance I can at the very least help you with the major issues of these cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cardkeybrian Posted July 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2013 in that case how do you delete a account because I quit I'm going back to making YouTube videos sorry I quit...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheNextEcho Posted July 18, 2013 Report Share Posted July 18, 2013 in that case how do you delete a account because I quit I'm going back to making YouTube videos sorry I quit...... such a shame that you quit so easily, you need to study a bit of geology, as far as I know you can't close a account on here, instead just don't bother login in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cardkeybrian Posted July 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2013 in that case bye..... and yes I'm giving up this easily sorry :I (I might be back If I get board with making my YouTube video) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted July 19, 2013 Report Share Posted July 19, 2013 Alright, here's the thing: The concept isn't bad, it's just the way you structured it. For one, all the monsters are normal monsters, and the one Gemini monster has no effect. The thing that makes Gemini's, well, Gemini's, is that they can be resummoned to gain an effect. If they don't have an effect, what's the point of it being a Gemini? Next, the leveling and stats are all over the place. I saw a guy with 2800 ATK that was only level 4 and a level 5 with like 1500 ATK or something. That COULD make sense iuf they had effects, but they don't so it's just random and awkward. Then there's the text (can't remember the actual name for some reason ._.) which is... no real way to say this and stil sound nice, it's god awefull. It seriously looks like you just pulled this out of the Sacred Cards GBA game and slapped it onto your own. Then there's the fact that you used bag grammer, misspelled words, and used the words Attack and Defense rather than ATK and DEF ._. Lastly, the spell cards and trap cards are both ridiculously overpowered and underpowered at the same time. Equiped monster gains 3000 ATK and DEF? How is that even close to balanced? And taking an opponents Trap to prevent another attack? What it the Trap doesn't prevent or can't be activated by attacks? his one's not a big deal, but some of the imaging could use som work too. I'm all for making your own types of cards like that, as I think that there's nothing wrong with making a new type, but at least make it realistic rather than make some copy of a type that already exist in the game (like Warrior, Beast, or Reptile), and at the very least make the rest of the card look like it could maybe exist. I'm alos going to say that you shouldn't just give up on card making, but rather use this as a learning experience so that you can get better and post something people won't have such huge problems with in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cardkeybrian Posted July 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2013 ...... I kinda feel like dying right about now.... (not really but,you know...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted July 19, 2013 Report Share Posted July 19, 2013 Well like I said in my previous post, don't feel bad or give up, just use it as a chance to learn more and get better so that the next cards you post are something everyone will like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cardkeybrian Posted July 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2013 oh well I'm going to stop feeling sorry for my self I'm going to keep trying:D (In my free time from posting YouTube Videos) Oh yeah the star name deal is just something I like to do. Don't say it's "god awefull" (One "L" not Two!) please :) ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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