Kingdom Xathers Posted July 21, 2013 Report Share Posted July 21, 2013 When a monster you control is targeted for an attack or a card effect: You can reveal this card in your hand; return this card to your Deck, and if you, change the target of that attack/effect to another correct target. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted July 21, 2013 Report Share Posted July 21, 2013 Uhm. Im not sure - is this "and if you" part some kind of new ocg thing? (Not sarcasm, i really dont know xD) About the Card. Name fits, effect, pic fits name..this is completely alright. The effect itself sure is useful, even if you need to have another target on the field, this will help you protecting a card you need Another thing. Why do you need to reveal it? Wouldnt it be enough to return it to deck immediately? its gonna be revealed anyway cause youre activating its effect. All in All i like it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippocampus Posted July 21, 2013 Report Share Posted July 21, 2013 Wow, this card is actually really cool. Nice balanced effect with being a potential Tuner to boot. The picture goes great with it too. Lol would you mind if I included it in my CCG? Another thing. Why do you need to reveal it? Wouldnt it be enough to return it to deck immediately? its gonna be revealed anyway cause youre activating its effect. It's actually worded better this way. If for some reason its effect was negated, you wouldn't be losing a card in your hand, you'd just be revealing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted July 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2013 Wow, this card is actually really cool. Nice balanced effect with being a potential Tuner to boot. The picture goes great with it too. Lol would you mind if I included it in my CCG? That depends, really. Would you happen to have a link to said CCG? It's actually worded better this way. If for some reason its effect was negated, you wouldn't be losing a card in your hand, you'd just be revealing it. ^ I like the way this kid thinks! =3 Yes, that is an excellent point you've made, and one that I somehow overlooked when writing the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted July 22, 2013 Report Share Posted July 22, 2013 Balance/Playability It is a very balanced card, however, the cost of a -1 for a "Shift" is kind of weak. It does have Tuner status, so that is good for another option rather then just cute tricks during the Battle Phase. What decks would use it is beyond me, to be honest. If it was Level 1 I could see it in some Winged Kuriboh Berserker Crush decks, MAYBE, but even then that is rather horrid. Flavor/Originality So much flavor. The changing of the attack symbolizing the distraction a fast flying creature brings is well thought and executed. The stats reflect what I would want to see on such a small creature, and the typing/Attribute are all fine and dandy. A very original hand trap, and a spin on an effect we haven't seen since FOREVER, so a very original card. A perfect fitting picture, might I add. Suggestions/Additional Comments I think it'd be better without Tuner Status, to be a Debris target (thus making cute little shenanigans with Tempest), and if the cost was a discard as opposed to a shuffle (this would also fuel Gulldo Pen for potential players, if deemed playable). Alternatively, the effect can only be used once per duel upon reveal (making the Tuner status a fine go to after the initial, not game changing effect. Something like:"Once per duel, when a monster you control is targeted for an attack/effect: You can reveal this card in your hand; change the target to another appropriate card on the field." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted July 22, 2013 Report Share Posted July 22, 2013 This is quite the nice card. I was going to review it earlier on if not for getting Enchanting to Lv100 on Skyrim.Flavour: Let's see here, a Bat driven to distract? The name is adorbs, I really like the canny, straight to the point names that Yu-Gi-Oh! once made use of, because names didn't need to be that fancy. The picture really goes along with this theme of distraction too. I couldn't think of any individual able to ignore the racket that this bat would whip up over the course of its simple flight. The effect also suits this theme - you could easily picture this giving you the cover you need to set up a sneaky swapping in terms of targeting. Also being a hand-trap does the job great.Balance: I think this card is definitely balanced. In truth this card's field-presence is somewhat limited due to its low stats, and the Tuner Sub-type makes this obviously reared for either its effect or, if said effect ain't possible, Synchro Material. Also, the effect it has isn't really unbalanced at all, and having it send back to the Deck only makes for a more careful later game.Use: This card has plenty of uses in the right Decks. In a Synchro-Spammy Deck, I reckon you could easily use this at 2 or even 3, because it is just so pokey and trolly. It would be able to misdirect and confuse opponents from one end of the spectrum to another. You could completely distort a Spellbook strategy, or make Dragon Rulers think twice. I think this card is pretty much an absolutely solid card in the Decks that could make use of it.Fixes: None necessary, a very much so well made card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hippocampus Posted July 22, 2013 Report Share Posted July 22, 2013 That depends, really. Would you happen to have a link to said CCG? ^ I like the way this kid thinks! =3 Yes, that is an excellent point you've made, and one that I somehow overlooked when writing the effect. Well thanks for your compliment! I can give you a link via PM, since the files are password-protected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgerr123 Posted August 1, 2013 Report Share Posted August 1, 2013 Very nice card! I also have a few up my sleeve... (yes pun intended) Well... Im of to upload them... Did you make this art btw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dgerr123 Posted August 3, 2013 Report Share Posted August 3, 2013 Its a completely beautiful card actually! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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