Alchemist Colress, possibly the longest effect ever.

[Not-so-Radiant Arin]

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[spoiler='All I need now are the beautiful locks of hair from the girl known as Lavender. Through her, I am able to complete this love potion!']During each of your End Phases: Special Summon 1 "Alchemist Token" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/Level 4/0 ATK/0 DEF) to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position. This card gains 100 ATK for each "Alchemist Token" you control. You can send 2 "Alchemist Tokens" you control to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 "Alchemist Colress" from your hand or Deck. This effect of "Alchemist Colress" can only be activated once per turn. An Xyz Monster that was Xyz Summoned using this card as an Xyz Material gets this effect:

* This card gains 100 ATK for each "Alchemist Token" you control. Once per turn: You can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 2 "Alchemist Tokens" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/Level 4/0 ATK/0 DEF) to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position.[/spoiler]

 

Yeah, I'm aware that the Xyz Material effect should be a dot. If I had patience, I would edit it in GIMP to the best of my ability, but it's almost half past midnight (but yet, I had the patience to type out what possibly might be the longest effect in YGO history). Anyways, Tokens don't get enough love, and I thought that this was the perfect card to give Tokens some more love, while also boosting Xyzs at the same time, by giving them an extra 200 ATK. There might be some sort of loop involving this card, so if you can spot it, let me know.

 

 

[wightpower]

That girl looks familiar... Oh my god! It's Patchy! She's adorable.

 

But I digress. The OCG looks fine to me, but I'll admit I'm not the best with that stuff. I also don't know enough about Xyz monsters, but I'm rather fond of her token transferring effect. It doesn't feel like it's too broken, to me anyway. Like it's one of those ATK gains that doesn't improve the monster too much, but just enough that it can overcome something a little stronger than it. In fact, despite the length of the effect seeming very daunting, this card might actually be underpowered. Or rather it would be if her original ATK wasn't a solid 1700 as it is. I can't really find anything to complain about this one. I actually think you could get away with making it so each token gives her 200 ATK, rather than 100, but I'd need another opinion to back that up.

 

You get a gold star.

[Not-so-Radiant Arin]

bump

[cool guy13]

Nice work! i like it.