Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted August 3, 2013 Report Share Posted August 3, 2013 [URL=http://yugico.com/user/16714-Dante_Sparda/card/57248-Light_of_Benevolence/263022-Queen_s_Blade_Rosaria][/URL] [spoiler='Your blood will fall like rose petals.']Cards cannot be discarded or sent to the Graveyard from the hand. When an effect activates that Targets a card in the Graveyard OR an effect activates in the Graveyard: You can Tribute this card; Negate that effect and Banish that card. During the next Standby Phase you activated this effect: You can Special Summon this card (from your Graveyard).[/spoiler] I was in the mood for some effect negation, but I didn't want it to be simply "Negate the effects of x monsters" like I had been doing recently. So I made a sort of Necrovalley-esque card that (I think) stops Dragon Rulers and can Summon itself back. Might be broken, might not be, who knows... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wightpower Posted August 3, 2013 Report Share Posted August 3, 2013 I like her. Other than my universal appreciation for lady cards, I think it's a very solid card with a good effect. I think her stats are good to balance out her situational effect, and I assume it'll make a good counter to something new that I'm only marginally aware of, like the Dragon Rulers. I don't really think it's broken at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted August 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2013 Some actual critique would be nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bbbgenius Posted August 4, 2013 Report Share Posted August 4, 2013 I would say consider making her a level 5 or 6 (like Numet arat Tetsudo. It's a level 5 monster with 1800ATK and 0DEF. It's effect is you can't special summon monsters with 1800 or less attack.). besides that, it really seems like an actual yu-gi-oh card. very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted August 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2013 I would say consider making her a level 5 or 6 (like Numet arat Tetsudo. It's a level 5 monster with 1800ATK and 0DEF. It's effect is you can't special summon monsters with 1800 or less attack.). besides that, it really seems like an actual yu-gi-oh card. very nice. When I said actual fixes, I didn't mean this. Making it a Level 5 or Level 6 kills it's playability, as you have to give up a card in order to put it on the field in the first place. If I wanted to make it a Level 5, I'd also put a SS clause (though, it's bad enough that it can already be searched by a multitude of cards). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saynt Posted August 4, 2013 Report Share Posted August 4, 2013 Ideally, this card would be to The End of Anubis as Doomcaliber Knight is to Angel O7, though it does a lot more than that. That first clause stops cards such as Effect Veiler as well, which I'm not sure is the intention here. Making the Tribute + negation mandatory, as well as adding a cost for the revival would somewhat balance this out. I'm also curious as to the flavour of the card. The singular form, rosarium, is a garden of roses, as far as I'm aware. Are there any particular details that I missed here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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