Water Prizma

[NaZgUly]

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You can activate this card's effect from your hand.Discard this card to the graveyard to end your opponent's Battle Pase.

[wightpower]

I don't think you need that first sentence actually. It might look better like this:

 

"You can discard this card from your hand, during either player's turn; end your opponent's Battle Phase."

 

Someone else might need to correct my own OCG, but I digress. It's a very simple card, and I like it enough, but I think you might be able to add more to it and get away with it still being reasonable, though as it is now, it's not a bad WATER attribute shield to stop your opponent from attacking. Still, give some thought to giving it some more effects to make it even more useful, like making it a Tuner or giving it some Special Summoning tricks to give it some added use while it's on the field.

[NaZgUly]

Yeah you are right i will fix it ;)

Check the water mage i made

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

Ever heard of Swift Scarecrow? Since that card does pretty much the same exact thing. Now, Scarecrow is a Machine, making it searchable with Gear Gigant. It's also EARTH, which allows you to make Naturia Beast by Summoning it via Masked Chameleon. The only advantages I really see that this have is that by being WATER, you can discard it for Mermail effects if you really have to, and its 100 ATK has a very small chance of winning you the game. I wouldn't really recommend trying to make it like Scarecrow, so I suppose you could try to give it a different effect to make it differ from Scarecrow. Not something to make it better than Scarecrow, since it could potentially support stalling Decks, and people don't like those Decks.