Megagun133 Posted August 17, 2013 Report Share Posted August 17, 2013 http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Brutal%20Corpse&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=4&magictraptype=Continuous&rarity=Rare&picture=http://img.playa-games.com/res/sfgame/res/gfx/scr/fight/monster/monster221.jpg&set1=2515&set2=8758&inset=false&type=Zombie&description=This%20card%20can%20be%20special%20summoned%20from%20your%20hand.%20If%20this%20card%20is%20special%20summoned%2C%20it%20cannot%20attack%20in%20the%20same%20turn.%20At%20anytime%2C%20if%20there%20are%20monsters%20with%20atleast%20500%20more%20ATK%20than%20this%20card%2C%20destroy%20this%20card.&circulation=1ST%20Edition&atk=2300&def=0&creator=Megagun133&year=2013&serial=48464675 Brutal Corpse EARTH /Zombie /Level 4 /2300 ATK /0 DEF Lore: This card can be special summoned from your hand. If this card is special summoned, it cannot attack in the same turn. At anytime, if there are monsters with atleast 500 more ATK than this card, destroy this card. I like making independent cards that everyone can use if they like the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKaitoKid Posted August 17, 2013 Report Share Posted August 17, 2013 Lore: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). This monster cannot declare an attack the turn it is Special Summoned. If there is a monster on the field whose ATK is 500 more than this card's, destroy this card. This card is a little too much. It has 2300 ATK and for a Level 4 it is too strong. I would say that the attack restriction balances it but it can be Normal Summoned to get around that. I'd say make it so it cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. That way it isn't a nightmare to face on the first turn. The second effect does little and will rarely comes into play so there's no real need to comment on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted August 17, 2013 Report Share Posted August 17, 2013 This is better than Photon Thrasher most of the time. Incredibly splashable 2300 spammable beater is not healthy. I think, other than the above poster's suggestion, i think you should limit the SS effect to be once per turn, or add more restriction for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megagun133 Posted August 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 17, 2013 Here is the updated Version, feel free to comment. http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Brutal%20Corpse&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=4&magictraptype=Continuous&rarity=Rare&picture=http://img.playa-games.com/res/sfgame/res/gfx/scr/fight/monster/monster221.jpg&set1=2515&set2=8758&inset=false&type=Zombie&description=This%20card%20can%20be%20special%20summoned%20from%20your%20hand.%20If%20this%20card%20is%20special%20summoned%2C%20it%20cannot%20attack%20in%20the%20same%20turn.%20At%20anytime%2C%20if%20there%20are%20monsters%20with%20atleast%20500%20more%20ATK%20than%20this%20card%2C%20destroy%20this%20card.%20When%20this%20card%20is%20normal%20summoned%2C%20negate%20all%20other%20effects%20of%20this%20card%2C%20it%27s%20base%20ATK%20becomes%201800.&circulation=1ST%20Edition&atk=2300&def=0&creator=Megagun133&year=2013&serial=48464675 Brutal Corpse EARTH /Zombie /Level 4 /2300 ATK /0 DEF This card can be special summoned from your hand. If this card is special summoned, it cannot attack in the same turn. At anytime, if there are monsters with atleast 500 more ATK than this card, destroy this card. When this card is normal summoned, negate all other effects of this card, it's base ATK becomes 1800. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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