7_of_9 Posted September 1, 2013 Report Share Posted September 1, 2013 Hi all this is my first card, hope you like it. Effect: 2 Level 10 monsters This card gains 500 ATK and DEF for each Xyz Material attached to this card. Once per turn when your opponent activates a Spell/Trap Card, you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card negate its activation and destroy it. Once per turn you can target 1 face-up monster on the field, attach that target to this card as Xyz Material. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted September 1, 2013 Report Share Posted September 1, 2013 While it is understandable that a Rank 10 would have to be quite powerful as they are quite hard to bring out, this card is overpowered due to its multiple powerful effects. It has a monster removal ability that bypasses any sort of destruction protection while also preventing said monster from hitting the Graveyard and getting revived. This ability has no cost and instead fuels the monster's ATK and DEF and Spell/Trap negation ability. Xyz Material are meant to be limited, allowing a monster to freely replenish its power is slightly defeating the purpose. Your monster also utterly outclasses the other Rank 10, Skypalace Gangaridai, which is quite powerful already. It can be a good idea to take existing cards and matching their power levels (well actually it would be wise to have a lower level of power). Flavorwise, the card makes little sense. First of all, it's a world-destroying mechanical whale and it's Thunder-Type? It would make more sense to be a Machine. Spell/Trap negation also has little relevance to mass destruction. If you are making a card called "Destructor of Worlds" it probably should have a multiple-card destruction effect. Nevertheless, it is a very good first attempt at a card and for this I would like to congratulate you. Welcome to YCM, 7 of 9 (what is that username supposed to mean anyway?), enjoy your stay here and we hope to see more creation from you in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
7_of_9 Posted September 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2013 Thanks for comment, this card can be destroyed by monster effect (catastor), but you are true it is overpawered (i scripted it on ygopro for try). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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