Yu-Gi-Oh FTW Posted September 1, 2013 Report Share Posted September 1, 2013 Tell Me what you think! Spell/Trap cards: Monsters: The effect is a bit hard to read so ill show you here: This card requires 3 tributes with at least 1 of them being an "Unholy Dragon" monster (Cannot be Normal Set). Every "Unholy Dragon" Monster on the field (Besides this card) gains 500 ATK and DEF. By paying 500 Life Points, this card can attack your opponent directly, but its ATK is Halved (Damage Calculation only). Desc: "Unholy Dragon: Acrus mor dei, Fire" - "Unholy Dragon: Intaurus Otaia Mor, Earth" - "Unholy Dragon: Natomus Cor, Ice" This card cannot attack or be destroyed the turn it is summoned. Every "Unholy Dragon" Monster (Besides this card) Gain 600 ATK, but lose 600 DEF. Unholy Servant Monsters: Weaknesses: Hope you like it! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vla1ne Posted September 2, 2013 Report Share Posted September 2, 2013 1) The divine attribute, it's nice to see it on a card, but they don't really deserve that title. not saying they're bad, but the divine attribute isn't meant for just any monsters, if you made them all light/dark attribute and only had a boss monster as divine, it might be better as far as the archtype goes, but right now, it just doesn't suit them, them, because they aren't really god class monsters. 2) The TCG/ OCG of these cards isn't really good, you have to iron these kinds of things out as much as possible before posting, because the most of the improper text on some of these cards is really easily avoided once you learn how to type it. 3) I like how you tried to balance out many of the effects with restrictions, that shows at least have a respectable grasp of what card balance is supposed to be, so great job there, but some of them either got nerfed a bit too much, (the unholy spell that takes 5 counters for a single token) or not quite balanced enough,(2 of your 3 tribute bosses but it just might be the bad wording) they are respectable cards, but don't be afraid to make them work together, as of now they're almost all just solo monsters that happen to have a few beneficial effects towards each other. Overall, if this is your first set here, I'm gonna have to say a solid 6/10, they're good, but they need better wording and a bit more balance/ synergy. congrats on your first archetype though! it might take a while to perfect them, but it's not a bad start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu-Gi-Oh FTW Posted September 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2013 Thanks for telling me what you think. I was just worried I would make Overpowered Cards (ever see the guy who made the forum's most overpowered cards?) Which two of the three of them? earth, Ice, or Fire? I'll tune down how many counters needed. after that, I don't know. Im not usually very creative (on the last few cards I did on this set, I spent at least an hour grasping for ideas in my head). and don't want to spoil the cards and get bad feedback on them. maybe we could Discuss it again tomorrow if Me and you have time and are agree to the idea.... am I getting carried away? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vla1ne Posted September 2, 2013 Report Share Posted September 2, 2013 nah it's cool, I can discuss it tomorrow if you need help designing them. I'm between semesters, so I've got the time to help develop cards. also, the problem cards are ice and earth, ice's effect needs a once per turn clause and a lower restriction. otherwise it'll be abused similar to the way brionac was. earth also needs a once per turn restriction, if you do that though, they'll both be fairly balanced. Also, the ritual monster and the card that summons him aren't really compatible, if you're going to make it work, you can say that the prophecy spell adds his ritual card from deck/graveyard to your hand when destroyed, but as it is now, it's not actually a viable card. and lastly, your equip trap should be continuous, it would still have the same effect, but it would be far more realistic that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu-Gi-Oh FTW Posted September 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2013 thx. is there a way to send you revisions of the cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshyago17 Posted September 2, 2013 Report Share Posted September 2, 2013 the cards overall are good, i just dont think you'll have enough tributes to summon all three dragons, i like them, expesially golden dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu-Gi-Oh FTW Posted September 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2013 no, I have enough, and one of the "Unholy Servant" monsters can be treated as an "Unholy Dragon" monster if one require a Unholy dragon card tribute. and thanks for the support on the cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshyago17 Posted September 2, 2013 Report Share Posted September 2, 2013 i checked right now, you'd need doubles of all, (your lv 5 doesnt count) plus 1 golden dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu-Gi-Oh FTW Posted September 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2013 why do I require doubles? Im not making a deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vla1ne Posted September 2, 2013 Report Share Posted September 2, 2013 all you'd have to do is re-edit them in the cardmaker, then repost them in your original post. and most of the time, if you create a new card(s) people will judge them as if they were a new archetype, that's why he said you don't have enough tributes. on the other hand, they do say only 1 of the tributes needs to be an unholy dragon monster, so I guess that works out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu-Gi-Oh FTW Posted September 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2013 I know how to fix them on the card maker then repost them. I just delete the flawed version and put the new one in its place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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