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[JessicaJess]

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[vla1ne]

Before anybody else comes in to this, let me warn you now, the mechanics of this card are extremely unbalanced. the OCG of this card needs severe work, and the card itself might be called an XYZ, but it looks nothing like one, so first thing is first;

 

1) Change the card type, there is another website that does XYZ's, but I cannot remember the name, so google it if you can, or have somebody else do it.

 

2) The OCG on this card... It is not good. if you can work on that please do, and if you can't then ask me for help, but whatever you do, make sure that before you post your next cards you run it past me or somebody else that has experience with OCG card text. we can help you get your OCG right.

 

3) From what I can gather of the effect, it is broken, horribly so, this card's effect is not realistic in the least, if it were ever released in real life, it would be banned on arrival for the sheer level of OP, or burned at the stake for the terrible design (by terrible design I mean that the card has nothing that would reasonably limit it to a more balanced form. for examples of why this is a bad thing, see: spellbook of judgement and gateway of the six).

 

4) the artwork and name are both nice, but if you look at the forum posts in the realistic thread (the single locked one that isn't pinned) you'll see that it's already used quite a bit.

 

There are many more things about this card that rub me the wrong way, but that is the general majority of what's wrong with it, fix those issues (or ask for help fixing them) and the card would be far better. points for trying, but right now, the card needs help, a lot of it.

 

EDIT: after seeing that you already knew about the other thread, I have one question, why would you make a more broken card than that one?