:^) Posted September 4, 2013 Report Share Posted September 4, 2013 I pulled two cards (the only cards of the Archetype so far, but I assume there would be more in upcoming sets) called Garbage Lord and Garbage Ogre. I decided to make some support cards for the archetype. When this card is Normal Summoned return 1 "Garbage Ogre" from your Graveyard to your Deck. If this card is selected as an attack target , you can discard 1 "Garbage Ogre" to negate the attack. This card can only be Special Summoned if there are 3 or more "Garbage" monsters in your Graveyard. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. When this card is removed from the field add 1 level 4 or lower "Garbage" monster from your Deck to your hand. While this card remains face-up on the field you must pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon "Garbage Lord" (from your hand). When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 "Garbage" monster from your Graveyard. When a monster(s) you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, gain 300 Life Points. When this card is destroyed by battle gain 300 Life Points for each monster your opponent controls. This card can only be used as Xyz Material for the Xyz Summon of a "Garbage" Xyz monster. This card gains 500 ATK for each face-up "Garbage" monster you control. While this card is face-up on the field: The effects of Equip Spell Cards are doubled. Activate only when an opponent's monster declares an attack on a "Garbage" monster. Destroy the attacking monster. You can Pay 1000 Life Points to Banish the monster instead. 2 level 3 "Garbage" monsters. During your Main Phase, you can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 level 5 or higher "Garbage" monster from your hand or Deck. During the End Phase, after this card is Summoned: both players take 1000 damage. 2 level 5 "Garbage" monsters. When this card is Successfully Xyz Summoned, add 2 level 4 or lower "Garbage" monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn: you can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to Inflict 500 Damage to your opponent for each face-up "Garbage" monster you control. That's it, OCG fixes are welcome. Peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoricuaBeast Posted September 4, 2013 Report Share Posted September 4, 2013 Not bad. It's nice to see support on that archetype. And yeah, there's some OCG errors, but they're minor. "Garbage Champion" Correct OCG: When this card is Normal Summoned return 1 "Garbage Ogre" from your Graveyard to your Deck. If this card is selected as an attack target , you can discard 1 "Garbage Ogre" to negate the attack.' Garbage Dragon: Correct OCG: This card can only be Special Summoned if there are 3 or more "Garbage" monsters in your Graveyard. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. When this card is removed from the field add 1 level 4 or lower "Garbage" monster from your Deck to your hand. Garbage Gateway: Correct OCG: While this card remains face-up on the field you must pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon "Garbage Lord" (from your hand). When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 "Garbage" monster from your Graveyard Garbage Berserker Correct OCG: When a monster(s) you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, gain 300 Life Points. When this card is destroyed by battle gain 300 Life Points for each monster your opponent controls. Garbage Prison Correct OCG: Activate only when an opponent's monster declares an attack on a "Garbage" monster. Destroy the attacking monster. You can Pay 1000 Life Points to Banish the monster instead. The rest are good, however, Garbage Sword Champion... I don't know how to properly fix the OCG on that one. Effect is kinda broken. It makes Stoic Challenge too free. Might wanna fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted September 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2013 The rest are good, however, Garbage Sword Champion... I don't know how to properly fix the OCG on that one. Effect is kinda broken. It makes Stoic Challenge too free. Might wanna fix that. Should I change the effect to: While this card is face-up on the field increase the ATK and DEF of Equip Spell Card effects by 500. This card gains 350 ATK for every "Garbage" monster you control. This card can only be used as Xyz Material for a "Garbage" Xyz monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted September 4, 2013 Report Share Posted September 4, 2013 Garbage Sword Champion Original OCG: While this card is face-up on the field all Equip Spell Card effects are doubled. This card gains 500 ATK for every "Garbage" monster you control. This card can only be used as Xyz Material for a "Garbage" Xyz monster. Fixed OCG: This card can only be used as Xyz Material for the Xyz Summon of a "Garbage" Xyz monster. This card gains 500 ATK for each face-up "Garbage: monster you control. While this card is face-up on the field: The effects of Equip Spell Cards are doubled. Or so this would be a pretty fair guess. I make cards and consistently test them so even the tiniest flaw in text annoys me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted September 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2013 Garbage Sword Champion Original OCG: Whiel this card is face-up on the field all Equip Spell Card effects are doubled. This card gains 500 ATK for every "Garbage" monster you control. This card can only be used as Xyz Material for a "Garbage" Xyz monster. Fixed OCG: This card can only be used as Xyz Material for the Xyz Summon of a "Garbage" Xyz monster. This card gains 500 ATK for each face-up "Garbage: monster you control. While this card is face-up on the field: The effects of Equip Spell Cards are doubled. Or so this would be a pretty fair guess. I make cards and consistently test them so even the tiniest flaw in text annoys me. Okay, thank you very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted September 4, 2013 Report Share Posted September 4, 2013 No prob at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted September 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2013 Does anyone have any OCG fixes for the Xyz Monster or are they fine? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted September 5, 2013 Report Share Posted September 5, 2013 2 level 3 "Garbage" monsters. During your Main Phase you can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 level 5 or higher "Garbage" monster from your hand or Deck. During the End Phase after this card is Summoned both players take 1000 damage. 2 level 5 "Garbage" monsters. When this card is Successfully Xyz Summoned add 2 level 4 or lower "Garbage" monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn you can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Inflict 500 Damage to your opponent for each "Garbage" monster you control. That's it, OCG fixes are welcome. Peace. Garbage Striker Wolvar 2 level 3 "Garbage" monsters. During your Main Phase, you can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 level 5 or higher "Garbage" monster from your hand or Deck. During the End Phase, after this card is Summoned: both players take 1000 damage. Garbage Djinn 2 level 5 "Garbage" monsters. When this card is Successfully Xyz Summoned, add 2 level 4 or lower "Garbage" monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn: you can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to Inflict 500 Damage to your opponent for each face-up "Garbage" monster you control. Based on how the cards are worded, this should layout fairly nice. Not much was needed for the OCG except a few commas and whatnot really. Any real change to the OCG could completely screw up the effect. Also, remember to add "face-up" because a lot of players will inflict damage even if the other monsters are facedown. In that sense, it completely kill your strategy if your opponent knows has some clue of what you're hiding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted September 5, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2013 Garbage Striker Wolvar 2 level 3 "Garbage" monsters. During your Main Phase, you can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 level 5 or higher "Garbage" monster from your hand or Deck. During the End Phase, after this card is Summoned: both players take 1000 damage. Garbage Djinn 2 level 5 "Garbage" monsters. When this card is Successfully Xyz Summoned, add 2 level 4 or lower "Garbage" monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn: you can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to Inflict 500 Damage to your opponent for each face-up "Garbage" monster you control. Based on how the cards are worded, this should layout fairly nice. Not much was needed for the OCG except a few commas and whatnot really. Any real change to the OCG could completely screw up the effect. Also, remember to add "face-up" because a lot of players will inflict damage even if the other monsters are facedown. In that sense, it completely kill your strategy if your opponent knows has some clue of what you're hiding. Thank you very much Horu, I will fix them when I don't feel so tired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted September 5, 2013 Report Share Posted September 5, 2013 Again, no prob. I love making cards. I have a friend that says "I'm the best when it comes to wording cards". I mostly just scan how the typical card is worded and such and just sort of follow that rule. As far as archtyping goes, you're doing a pretty decent job at making your cards work together and gain some sort of benefit from other cards of said archtype. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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