New Lightsworn Spell Card

[Brickzcity201]

Reckless Lightsworn Draw

 

 

 

Draw two cards, then send two lightsworn monsters from deck to grave then skip the next two draw phrases of your next turns

 

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[Toffee.]

Skipping your Draw Phases or not, this is still idiotically overpowered, for what its going for.
On top of the fact it's basically Pot of Greed for Lightsworns(Which shouldn't exist in the first place), this also immediately sets up for half of Judgment Dragon's Summon. Hell, you could even be a scrub and play Wulf, so in addition to the free +2, you also basically pulled 2 2100 beaters out of the deck for very little, which, at the end, will basically turn this into a +3.

[Lonk]

There are some capitalizations needed in the OCG.  Plus, did you really just give Lightsworns a Reckless Greed (which is already questionable design) and Double Foolish Burial in the same card?

 

I hope you realized that this card is badly designed, right?  Giving LS a Double Foolish Burial is questionable design itself, but giving it draw power makes Recharge almost obselete, and this card is bonkers with how much possible advantage and mill control you give it.

 

3/10

[Brickzcity201]

just was a fun card 2 make dont go bashing me like this

[Kingdom Xathers]

Hell, you could even be a scrub and play Wulf--

Armz, I like ya and all, but if you keep talkin' smack 'bout Wulf, I will end you... (Lol jk)


And seriously, Brickz? You had to have known this was going to happen when you posted this topic.
Constructive criticism =/= bashing. What they have pointed out are very valid concerns. True, you may have made this for fun, but the fact remains that it's far from balanced or realistic, which is precisely what this section of the forums are for.

[Brickzcity201]

oh sorry i didnt know i thought it was ok

[Toffee.]

Armz, I like ya and all, but if you keep talkin' smack 'bout Wulf, I will end you... (Lol jk)

I have nothing against the card itself, it's just, nobody really plays Wulf in Sworns(at least if I remember correctly), let alone just 1 copy of it.
You would be a scrub BECAUSE your playing it in like 4s or 12s.

oh sorry i didnt know i thought it was ok

Brick, out of curiosity, do you even play Lightsworns? Doesn't seem like you do, and just assumed they needed support from some speculation of them being underpowered.

[Brickzcity201]

i do play them but i just want better cards for them

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OCG Fix

 

Draw 2 cards and send 2 "Llghtsworn" monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard. Skip your next 2 Draw Phases after this cards activation.

 

I'd add a clause or something like "Pay 1000 Life Points to activate this card." or "The monsters sent to the Graveyard cannot be Special Summoned the turn this card is activated."

 

But if you allow others to guide you, you will end up making really good cards.

[Brickzcity201]

thanks alot for the advice