Number 27: Sly Goblin

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I should probably do something better with my day, rather than making YuGiOh cards.

 

 

2 Level 1 monsters

Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Send 1 level 4 or lower Fiend-type monster from your Deck or Graveyard to the Top of your Deck. During your End Phase, if this card has no Xyz Material attached to it, destroy this card. When this card is sent to the Graveyard (except by it's own effect) inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each Fiend-type monster in your Graveyard.

 

OCG Fixes are welcome. Peace.

[BoricuaBeast]

First off, the pic looks so appropriate...

Secondly, the effect is ok, but I think adding the monster to your hand is a bit controversial. This thing would make Dark Worlds broken as hell, provided anyone would be daring enough to run D-boyz. How about it either sends them to the top of the deck or to the Graveyard? Also, a 500 burn for each fiend kinda has OTK-capability, so nerfing it down to 100 would seem more fair.

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First off, the pic looks so appropriate...

Secondly, the effect is ok, but I think adding the monster to your hand is a bit controversial. This thing would make Dark Worlds broken as hell, provided anyone would be daring enough to run D-boyz. How about it either sends them to the top of the deck or to the Graveyard? Also, a 500 burn for each fiend kinda has OTK-capability, so nerfing it down to 100 would seem more fair.

 

Hmmm I can change it from hand to top of Deck. But I don't think I could make the burn any lower than 300.

[BoricuaBeast]

Hmmm I can change it from hand to top of Deck. But I don't think I could make the burn any lower than 300.

Understandable. But even though 300 seems good enough on your standards, I feel it needs a special condition to burn, ya know? Like if it were to be sent to the Graveyard except by it's own effect

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Understandable. But even though 300 seems good enough on your standards, I feel it needs a special condition to burn, ya know? Like if it were to be sent to the Graveyard except by it's own effect

 

Yes that sounds like a good idea.

[Not-so-Radiant Arin]

One thing I commonly notice with a lot of your cards is that the Ignition effects are actually labelled as Maintenance Costs, which is not what you're going for (I think). So you should add "You can" before the Detach 1 Xyz Material blah blah blah. Otherwise, you have to specify an appropriate phase or timing to activate the effect, and then it would just look weird on paper.

 

As for the actual card, what Deck(s) can actually get this out consistently? Dustons I imagine, but beyond that, you'd have to use D-Boyz, and that's actually not that great of a card. Actually, Dustons using this card makes their burn shenanigans way more incredible than before. Sending from the Deck to the top of the Deck is something not a lot of game mechanics use, so it's interesting to say the least. 

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One thing I commonly notice with a lot of your cards is that the Ignition effects are actually labelled as Maintenance Costs, which is not what you're going for (I think). So you should add "You can" before the Detach 1 Xyz Material blah blah blah. Otherwise, you have to specify an appropriate phase or timing to activate the effect, and then it would just look weird on paper.

 

As for the actual card, what Deck(s) can actually get this out consistently? Dustons I imagine, but beyond that, you'd have to use D-Boyz, and that's actually not that great of a card. Actually, Dustons using this card makes their burn shenanigans way more incredible than before. Sending from the Deck to the top of the Deck is something not a lot of game mechanics use, so it's interesting to say the least. 

 

I see what you're saying, I'll fix it now.