moltenpoison Posted September 20, 2013 Report Share Posted September 20, 2013 Here it is with OCG fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wightpower Posted September 20, 2013 Report Share Posted September 20, 2013 I think you've balanced the cost out alright. My suggested OCG fix and effect tweak is this: "This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card requires a cost of 1500 of your own Life Points to attack. During the End Phase, banish this card. If this card's effects would be negated, it is banished." This way, you can avoid the 1500 cost in the event that you wanted to use this thing for something other than attacking. Maybe you need a 4-star to get a specific Synchro or Xyz monster on the field and this is the one you happened to draw. Now it can be useful without taking a chunk out of your Life Points, but just in case you need a 3000 ATK brute to quickly do some damage, it's a good card. I added the last effect in case the player wanted to be a smartass and use Skill Drain or the Shadow Imprisoning Mirror to get a free 3000 ATK monster (which I do all the time with Crazy Box). Hopefully this improves the card's balance a little. I like the idea, the name is fine, and I have no problems with the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted September 20, 2013 Report Share Posted September 20, 2013 Cannot be Summoned, except by its own effect. You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by paying 1500 Life Points. During the End Phase: Banish this card. Overall, it provides a nice beater for a turn and boasts a 6000 after Limiter Removal before going into an Xyz/Synchro MP2. Though this sounds amazing, 1500 is a hefty cost and would most likely ensure this card isn't abusable, especially considering in multiples you'd definitely put yourself at risk more than anything. Overall, worth its cost for a temporary beater and play maker, but the cost is a nice counter balance in partnership with the banish during End Phase drawback (assuming you don't play Skill Drain, but with that at 1 that is hardly worthy of note). Nice job, digging the simplicity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 20, 2013 Report Share Posted September 20, 2013 This card cannot be Summoned, except by its effect. You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by paying 1500 Life Points. During the End Phase: Banish this card. I'm just going to nitpick here and say that you people need to realize that "This card cannot be Summoned" isn't correct OCG anymore. The correct term now is "Cannot be Summoned", so for this card, it would be "Cannot be Summoned, except by its own effect. *rest of the effect*" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted September 21, 2013 Report Share Posted September 21, 2013 Forgot to exclude this card and own, apologies. Fix should be correct now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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