Meteor Titan - Magtheus

[Shradow]

You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) if you control at least 3 face-up FIRE monsters. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1: You can banish 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard to activate 1 of these effects;

- This card loses 400 ATK; all other FIRE monsters you control gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase.

- If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent, until the End Phase.

 
I haven't seriously made a card since before problem-solving text was implemented, so any card grammar advice, as well as general feedback, is welcomed.

[the_engineer]

EDIT: I have a possible idea, what if this card let you tribute a FIRE monster you controlled (or maybe banish a FIRE monster in your grave) to activate both its effects that turn? Would that be too much?

That would make this a perfect card for Laval decks, since it is based on sending monsters to the graveyard and banishing them shortly after to activate other effects, but i guess it would be too much. I would make it so that once per turn, you can banish 1 FIRE monster from the graveyard to activate 1 of the effects listed

[Shradow]

That sounds good. I think the effect is finalized now, it just may need grammar correction that I'm unaware of.

[the_engineer]

Now it's OK, i would definitely recommend it to Laval fans ;)

 

i would give it a 8/10