Kyng's Old Account Posted September 24, 2013 Report Share Posted September 24, 2013 2 Level 4 EARTH MonstersThis card cannot be destroyed during the Battle Phase. You must detach an Xyz Material to declare an attack with this card. During the End Phase, when this card has no Xyz Materials: You can attach 1 card on the field to this card as an Xyz Material instead, otherwise destroy this card.[hr]Flavour Music - DragonlordDilong, the Dragon of the Earth, roars with a furious might. As he roars and ascends from the great ravines from where he dwells, he unleashes an unruly, relentless rage upon his foes. Though his use is indeed costly, an ally of Dilong can make use of his merciless force to crush foes who stood before his new master.I hope you like the card as much as I did making it.[hr][spoiler=KCC?]As indicated by the logo in the top right corner, this is the start of a new series of Custom Cards I'm creating. I figured I'd do a brand new one, now that the Card Maker is updated. This also marks my return to this section, including critique coming tomorrow.[/spoiler]Fixes: Lore error amended, now can only attach cards from your side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted September 24, 2013 Report Share Posted September 24, 2013 Sorry about the bad post. I like the card though, and what I would recommend changing has already been changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted September 24, 2013 Report Share Posted September 24, 2013 My main gripe with this card is that it can also attach your opponents cards to it as Material. OPT End Phase card removal as a reward for sustaining a huge-ass beater doesn't seem fair to me HOWEVER if you were to restrict the effect to only attaching your cards, it'd be fine. The rest of the card is ok: BP immunity is nice for stuff like MF and the occasional BoM play, and the restriction is fair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted September 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2013 My main gripe with this card is that it can also attach your opponents cards to it as Material. OPT End Phase card removal as a reward for sustaining a huge-ass beater doesn't seem fair to me HOWEVER if you were to restrict the effect to only attaching your cards, it'd be fine.The rest of the card is ok: BP immunity is nice for stuff like MF and the occasional BoM play, and the restriction is fair.NOTE: Noticed lore error, giving this the ability to attach any card. Will fix. Is intended to only apply to your side of the field.I know where you were coming from. :3I've made that fix. I'm glad you liked the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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