United Materials

[yugiohmakermasta]

Lore: Once per turn, you can select 1 face-up monster you control and equip it to a face-up Xyz monster you control as an Xyz Material. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this card's effect.

Wanted to make a card specifically for XYZ and I now have this one, I hope this card isn't too broken and can be made to work out.

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Its not broken at all. In fact, it seem a little weak. The battle phase limit is completely unneeded. This card does show promise, though. 

Once per turn, you can select 1 face-up monster you control and equip it to a face-up Xyz monster you control as an Xyz Material. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this card's effect.

 

Limited edition should be LIMITED EDITION. XD

 

I think that's how the OCG should changed. I still am not sure if Material, and Battle Phase get capitalized. 

Hope this helps!

[yugiohmakermasta]

Its not broken at all. In fact, it seem a little weak. The battle phase limit is completely unneeded. This card does show promise, though. 

Once per turn, you can select 1 face-up monster you control and equip it to a face-up Xyz monster you control as an Xyz Material. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this card's effect.

 

Limited edition should be LIMITED EDITION. XD

 

I think that's how the OCG should changed. I still am not sure if Material, and Battle Phase get capitalized. 

Hope this helps!

Thanks, I fixed it.

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Good fixes. Didn't even see the continuous thing at first. XD

[yugiohmakermasta]

Good fixes. Didn't even see the continuous thing at first. XD

Yeah, I didn't want to go over the top, so I had to make it a once per turn effect. I feel like I could do more with this card but I am not sure what.   Ahem think about superdreadnought rail cannon gustav max for a minute with this card xD

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Yeah, I didn't want to go over the top, so I had to make it a once per turn effect. I feel like I could do more with this card but I am not sure what.   Ahem think about superdreadnought rail cannon gustav max for a minute with this card xD

While that is a valid point, Gustav can attack after using his effect without this card. Gustav: 2000 Damage, twice if he lives long enough. 3000 attack as well. By the time this card would be used for Gustav, the opponent would be dead. And you'd need a steady supply of monsters to keep it up, but that isn't too hard. Now, if a card comes out (like a CNumber I've heard of) comes out that can dish out massive destruction at the cost of an Xyz Material, then this limit would make sense. Maybe change it to "non-Xyz monsters you control can not attack during the turn this effect is activated" or "Xyz monsters you control can not attack during the turn this effect is activated," whichever one may seem to work best.

[Trebuchet MS]

You don't equip Xyz Materials, you attach them. It would go something like:

 

"Once per turn: You can select target 1 face-up Xyz Monster you control; and equip it to a face-up Xyz attach 1 monster you control to that target as an Xyz Material. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this card's effect."

 

This strongly reminds me of Spirit Converter, only less restrictive in the attaching department.

[yugiohmakermasta]

You don't equip Xyz Materials, you attach them. It would go something like:

"Once per turn: You can select target 1 face-up Xyz Monster you control; and equip it to a face-up Xyz attach 1 monster you control to that target as an Xyz Material. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this card's effect."

This strongly reminds me of Spirit Converter, only less restrictive in the attaching department.

thanks, I'll be sure to fix it and tbh never knew spirit converter existed