CXyz Darknubis

[death00]

So my second card cc appreciated 

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Lore: 2 Level 7 monsters

This monster can only be summoned by Ranking Up "Anubis, Lord of the Dead" This card gains any Xyz material monsters attached to "Anubis, Lord of the Dead". This monster's ATK and DEF are equal to the of total all Xyz material monsters attached to it. Detach one Xyz material monster to have this monster gain the ability to deal damage when this card attacks a defense position monster.

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Lore:

2 Level 7 monsters

This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each card in both Graveyards. Detach 1 Xyz material from this card : send all monsters to the Graveyard, except this card. You cannot attack the turn you activate this cards effect.

 

[Zextra]

When you post a card that involves a card that isn't real, please post that one as well. Thanks.

[death00]

did in previous post, but will add with lore

[Zextra]

Thanks; but now that there are 2 cards in the opening post, this topic will be moved to Realistic Cards - Multiple Cards.

[Trebuchet MS]

How do you Rank-Up something if it's of the same Rank as its base form? Lemme fix that...

 

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2 Level 7 monsters

This monster can only be summoned by Ranking Up "Anubis, Lord of the Dead" This card gains any Xyz material monsters attached to "Anubis, Lord of the Dead". Must be Special Summoned by the effect of a "Rank-Up-Magic" card, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This monster's ATK and DEF are equal to the of total Ranks/Levels of all Xyz Material Monsters attached to it x 200. Detach one Xyz material monster to have this monster gain the ability to deal damage when If this card attacks a Defense Position monster: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent.

 

? ATK/? DEF"

 

I took some liberties in trying to interpret the second effect that determines its ATK and DEF, and I hope that's what you intended. "The of total all" has been the second worst grammatical trainwreck I've seen, and if its ATK and DEF is determined just by the Xyz Material count, those are terribly low stats. Unless you wanted it to be "the total original ATK and DEF (respectively) of all Xyz Material Monsters attached to it". Still, these kinds of effects are usually accompanied with ? ATK/DEF.