fritzcat12 Posted October 16, 2013 Report Share Posted October 16, 2013 This is my new card... [attachment=39469:Beast----of salsateur.jpg] I hope you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas the Flame Posted October 16, 2013 Report Share Posted October 16, 2013 Old yugioh card image, icky Chose 1 card and do what with it? You need to be specific for yugioh cards. 2/10 (only because the effect would make you tribute it to work) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted October 16, 2013 Report Share Posted October 16, 2013 If I can fill in the blanks right, you are going for a Pot of Duality-like effect. The following is how it should be worded: [quote] When this card is Tributed; look at the top 3 cards of your Deck, add 1 of them to your hand, then shuffle the rest back into your Deck. [/quote] TBH, I would use Pot of Duality over this. Pot of Duality is much faster as you can activate it straight from the hand. Also, this has to wait for you to have something to Tribute it for. While that is happening, your opponent can just easily get rid of it. For all purposes, this is a beatstick with an effect that will rarely be used. If I were you, I would have made this card with this effect in mind given what you already have in place: [quote] When this card is destroyed by your opponent (either by battle or by a card effect); you can look at the top 3 cards of your Deck, add 1 of them to your hand, then shuffle the rest back into your hand. You can only use the effect of "Beast of Salsateur" once per turn. [/quote] With the effect like this, it gives it more chances to use its effect. Also, the possibility of abusing this card with multiple copies is out of the question. I'm not saying this will be used regularly, but it does show more promise than what you originally had. Though, the stats on this card seems a little out of place for a card like this. Maybe 1800 ATK and 1500 DEF will work better? I hope all of this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fritzcat12 Posted October 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2013 I'll fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas the Flame Posted October 17, 2013 Report Share Posted October 17, 2013 shuffle the rest back into your deck, not your hand. 8/10 (better picture) nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted October 17, 2013 Report Share Posted October 17, 2013 shuffle the rest back into your deck, not your hand. Overlooked that part in my fix. Sorry about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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