DragonCreator123 Posted October 29, 2013 Report Share Posted October 29, 2013 My first Xyz card, so there may be some mistakes. Hope you like it! :D 2 Level 6 Spellcaster-type monsters Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz-material from this card: Target 1 Spellcaster-type monster your opponet controls. During your Standby Phase: That target is destroyed, and you deal Battle Damage to your opponet equal to the Level of the destroyed monster x200. If a Spellcaster-type monster you control is destroyed while this card is up on the field, you can pay 500 Life Points: Special Summon it on your side of the field during your next Main Phase. If this card is destroyed: Special Summon a Level 6 or less Spellcaster-type monster from your banished zone. If this card is destroyed, put it back into your Extra Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Trebuchet MS Posted October 30, 2013 Report Share Posted October 30, 2013 Right then, standard lore fix. "Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 Spellcaster-Type monster your opponent controls; during your next Standby Phase, destroy that target is destroyed, and you deal Battle inflict damage to your opponent equal to the its Level of the destroyed monster x 200. If a Spellcaster-type monster you control is destroyed: while this card is up on the field You can pay 500 Life Points to target that monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon it on your side of the field during at the start of your next Main Phase. If this card is destroyed: You can target 1 of your banished Special Summon a Level 6 or less lower Spellcaster-Type monsters; Special Summon that target from your banished zone. If this card is destroyed: return this card from your Graveyard to put it back into your Extra Deck." PSCT words things like this - Activation requirement: Costs and target designation; rest of the effect. Pay attention to when to use the colon and semicolon. Also, under most circumstances, damage inflicted outside of attacks cannot be battle damage, unless it's effects like "Your opponent takes the battle damage you would have taken from that battle, instead". As for the effect itself, it's highly situational, affecting only Spellcasters on either side of the field. Then again, it sports impressive ATK for a Rank 6 and contains recursion... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonCreator123 Posted October 31, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 31, 2013 Thanks for the feedback :D BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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