Darkness Chaos Dragon

[ChaosMarquis]

 

 

 

 

This is m first created card and i create the image of the fusion monster ;D

[Trebuchet MS]

Right then, let's work out the card lore:

 

This monster can only Must be Special Summoned by Fusion Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. The ATK of This card increases by gains 500 ATK points for each Spellcaster-Type and Dragon-Type monster on the field and in either each player's Graveyard.

 

What I notice first is that this card automatically has a minimum 5000 ATK (500 for itself, and a total of 1000 for its Fusion Materials) without much effort. And that's before we look in the opponent's Graveyard. The only other card I've seen that can approach such standards is Red Nova Dragon, and even that card doesn't check opponent's Graveyards for ATK boosts. On the other hand, since this card only has massive stats without additional protection or combo potential, it kinda evens things out, seeing that it's all about hitting very hard.

 

Had this card been created prior to the PSCT-style standardized writing, the card lore would have been more or less perfectly written. Pretty decent for a first.

[ChaosMarquis]

thanks for the comentary and for the help, im from mexico and i not still dominate the english XDD i not speak it good XDD, whatever i copy the lenguage of the original cards for use it in my cards :D

[goddamnit names are a pain]

This card is a little OP, but no much. I go with Gadjiltron here. I do like the fact that it would hurt Dragon Rulers and Prophecy quite badly. 

Maybe during each end phase, or after each attack, banish a Dragon/Spellcaster from each grave? And if you can't, destroy it?