JamieDeeRaw Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 Hey everybody, this card that I'm about to post is an EDIT of it's original I made in an earlier post, please except it warmly... Name: Fairy Empress Fijii Card Type: Monster Effect Attribute: Light Level Stars: 8 Card Rarity: Rare Circulation: Limited Edition Type: Fairy (obviously hehe ) Description: Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must first be Special Summoned (from your hand) by Tributing 2 Fairy-Type monsters whose total ATK equal 2000 or more. When this card is Special Summoned: All face-up monsters with 1000 or less ATK gain 800 ATK until your next turn. ATK: 2800 DEF: 2500 Card: -----/-----/----- Let the evaluation begin, and a quick warning, creative criticism is exceptable, but BASHING will not be TOLERATED...OK now evaluate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitsuneko Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 Really oddball stats. YGO cards typically have ATK and DEF stats in a multiple of 50, and even then using a multiple of 100 is the more usual thing. That aside, this card looks extremely weak, and it can still be normal summoned to bypass that kind of silly SS requirement (you missed the "This card cannot be Normal Summoned."). The effect doesn't make it worth 2 tributes, much less 3 fairy tributes. Tons of OCG text errors left and right. I guess I'll leave that to someone else to fix. Next, the art... It looks incredibly sketchy for a children's card game card, and well... You can properly edit the size so that it fits better on the card template rather than being all bent out of shape. Typically, I just crop to 248x244 pixels (there's probably better dimensions to use... Idunno, I just started with that and stuck with it). Just remember that if the original dimensions of the image aren't something close to a square, you will get weird results when you end up uploading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieDeeRaw Posted November 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2013 Thank you for your very precise Criticism, I took into consideration of many errors made in the first post made, the picture is based off of Fairies so and she's rather spoiled and a child of the wood, so her attire might look to revealing,but girls of the wood, and fairies are destinguished by their clothes,she's spontanious so...you have a bit comfort wear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted November 19, 2013 Report Share Posted November 19, 2013 Let me help you out again. This card Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must first be you can Special Summoned (from your hand) by Tributing Once you sacrifice 2 Fairy-Type monsters with added whose total ATK equal to 2000 or more higher. Once When this card is Special Summoned: All face-up monsters cards with 1000 or less ATK gain 800 ATK until your next turn for 2 turns. It's ridiculously easy to meet that Special Summon condition unless you're running a Deck filled with Fairies with very low ATK. At which I'd like to question the player's motives on doing so. And the reward for Summoning this card is... a little boost that brings your tinier Fairies up to 1800 ATK at best but is also temporary? I haven't been raising my objections to your other monster's stats, but usually most monster's ATK and DEF, with some very few exceptions, are multiples of 50, meaning they often end in "00" or "50" as their last 2 digits. Rectify this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieDeeRaw Posted November 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2013 Roger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted November 19, 2013 Report Share Posted November 19, 2013 You have corrected the effect, but the stats are unchanged. So I shall fix them for you. ATK 2770/DEF 2467 -> ATK 2800/DEF 2500 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NaZgUly Posted November 19, 2013 Report Share Posted November 19, 2013 Well this is how we Leageu PLayers call:Support.Because it incr. your all monsters ATK by 800.This is good but...you need a beatstick Fairy.Make a Fairy-type that has no effect,but has high attack..something like the main cards of Yugi and Judai(Dark Magician and Neos). Overall its pretty good card! 8/10 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieDeeRaw Posted November 20, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2013 My bad about the late ATK and DEF change, was trying to figure out if it would be a fair fit, I want her to be a good standing card with the other cards in the Fairy Deck, so she can support them better when I lay out either "Fairy Swamp Thing "(will post later, or "Fairy Forest "(will post later ). Thanks for all edit advice, and too @jakerer: Good idea, what sex would you prefer, or rather it be beast-like, respond and Ill get to the concept, always interested in a new card idea,as well anyone else have suggestions, please don't hesitate to post, tell me how cool you'd like the art as well (use 1-20 in number scale for quality ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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