Selren Posted November 24, 2013 Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 I used to come to this website all the time and make card after card, and recently I was going through my attic and found my old collection of cards, it got me back into yugioh after years of not even thinking about it This is the second card I've made in quite a while, I just kinda wanted to show it off or whatever, I personally would really like it if I could have a real copy of this card, it'd be pretty cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
death00 Posted November 24, 2013 Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 kinda sounds like an equip spell card, only it would change to- "Equip to a monster you control" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AzNPaladin Posted November 24, 2013 Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 Is that a Grineer from Warframe???? Few errors: 1. Defense is spelled wrong 2. OCG (Official Card Grammar, not to be confused with Official Card Game.) 3. Lore is missing on the bottom OCG Fix: Target 1 monster you control: It gains ATK equal to its DEF and its DEF becomes 0. During the End Phase that you activated this effect; destroy that monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Selren Posted November 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 Is that a Grineer from Warframe???? Few errors: 1. Defense is spelled wrong 2. OCG (Official Card Grammar, not to be confused with Official Card Game.) 3. Lore is missing on the bottom OCG Fix: Target 1 monster you control: It gains ATK equal to its DEF and its DEF becomes 0. During the End Phase that you activated this effect; destroy that monster. Yeah, I realized that stuff after I already posted it, I should have spent more time thinking about the actual grammar of the description Stupid me And yeah, it's an image of a Grineer that's been Heavily modified Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AzNPaladin Posted November 24, 2013 Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 Yeah, I realized that stuff after I already posted it, I should have spent more time thinking about the actual grammar of the description Stupid me And yeah, it's an image of a Grineer that's been Heavily modified Lol, you're pretty new (or are you?) And I'm not the best at grammar correcting, some of it could be wrong. I'm just explaining from my own experience with grammar. Watch some veteran come along and fix my correction. Card looks good by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Selren Posted November 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 Lol, you're pretty new (or are you?) And I'm not the best at grammar correcting, some of it could be wrong. I'm just explaining from my own experience with grammar. Watch some veteran come along and fix my correction. Card looks good by the way. Well, this specific account is new, I used to have one on here years ago that I made a ton of cards on, but never got involved with the forum, but when I tried to get on it, I couldn't remember my password or anything, so I just made this one =P And thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AzNPaladin Posted November 24, 2013 Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 Well, this specific account is new, I used to have one on here years ago that I made a ton of cards on, but never got involved with the forum, but when I tried to get on it, I couldn't remember my password or anything, so I just made this one =P And thanks No problem. Probably explains why you use the old OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Selren Posted November 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 No problem. Probably explains why you use the old OCG. I'll try to stop doing that =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AzNPaladin Posted November 24, 2013 Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 I'll try to stop doing that =P This might help you: http://pandoragaming.co.uk/topic/9526072/1/ Also, if the text is hard to see, just highlight it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Selren Posted November 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 I'm still not so great with the new OCG, if anyone wants to point out the grammatical errors please do so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AzNPaladin Posted November 25, 2013 Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 I'm still not so great with the new OCG, if anyone wants to point out the grammatical errors please do so I'll fix it: Target 1 Machine-Type monster that your opponent controls; halve its ATK and DEF until his/her next End Phase. Some other errors 1. Don't post additional cards in the Realistic - Single Cards section. 2. Just make a new topic in the Realistic - Multiple Cards section and input the cards. 3. Don't post new cards in the comments, edit the first post and put the card there. You also forgot the lore on the bottom of the card. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted November 25, 2013 Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 I'm still not so great with the new OCG, if anyone wants to point out the grammatical errors please do so As Guan Yu pointed out above, when you post additional cards, please do so in the opening post. Do not post additional cards in the middle of your thread. Also, if you are posting multiple cards (or plan on doing so), please refer to the Realistic Cards - Multiple Cards section to do so, rather than single cards. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted November 25, 2013 Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 As for Attack from Orbit: Select a Target 1 monster you control; reduce its defence to zero DEF becomes 0, and add also it gains ATK equal to its original DEF defence value to its attack. Destroy that card it at the during the End Phase of this turn. There should be a sticky regarding card grammar. Check it out, since it provides rules for standardizing to the new Problem Solving Card Text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 So Im sorta lost on this card. What purpose would it truly pose in game? Would it be used to help with defending an opponent or offending an opponent? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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