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So I was thinking of making a PMMM fanfic.


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Trouble is, I can't decide whether to set it before Walpurgis Night dies or after it. I'm leaning towards after, but I need to think of a way Madoka's seal of hope could be broken so the Witches pop into existence again, and I'd rather not have my proposed method be called out as BS. I value realism just as much any other person. The seal of hope could disperse after X amount of time, but I can't remember if I've read anything about it or not, so I'm casting doubt on it for now. Better to be wrong in doubting something than wrong in saying that it definitely does or doesn't happen.

 

ANYWAY, I've got the name of the fic (it shall be called Puella Magi Takara Magica) and I already started the first chapter, though I'm thinking of re-writing it. But I'll probably only go as far as completing that first chapter, and it sure as hell won't be getting to a Witch fight yet, or even a Familiar fight for that matter. Unless...

 

- I can figure out when exactly it is best to set this fic at.

- I decide how to go about breaking Madoka's seal of hope, should I go with setting the fic after Walpurgis Night dies. Some advice here would be nice, since as I said, I can't remember reading anything about it, so I may be relying on someone else's knowledge.

- I actually have a handful of Witches to have as the bosses of the fic. I've got the final boss Witch sorted out already, and I have some ideas for a potential first boss one, but I suck with names... as I found out the hard way -_-

 

I WOULD toss up an app field for the Witches and perhaps a few Magical Girls as well if you'd want to make one, but I'm not sure if the first chapter requirement still stands or not, so I'll leave it out for now just to be safe. So... yeah, those are the issues I'm having atm, but I'll soldier on and try to get that first chapter up and running despite those issues. If there are any other PMMM fans that know more about the anime and are willing to lend a hand, that'll be great.

 

Cheers.

 

EDIT: 5 Character Apps to come. Watch this space.

 

[spoiler=Magical Girl App Sheet]Icon of Character (Optional)

Wish Made by Character (Word-for-word, and in quotation marks)

 

Personal Information:

 

Name of Character:

Age: (Must be 12-16. No exceptions evah)

Date of Birth: (No year)

Blood Type: (You can use A, B, AB or O as well as + or -. Nothing fancy)

Appearance: (4 lines min. You may include a pic in addition to the appearance, but if you do, spoiler it please. Also, remember to include Soul Gem color as well as how the character appears as a Magical Girl and all that)

Personality: (6 lines min.)

 

Combat Information:

 

Weapon of Choice: (The weapon that your character spawns in combat. Remember, PMMM Magical Girls can spawn heaps of their WOC's :3)

Power: (Your character's power in (great) detail. Must be based on your character's wish. Also, be careful of your power if you want her in; too strong and I'll deny your character, but too weak and she won't last very long at all)

Technique(s): (In case you wanna be fancy with your Magical Girl. Optional, but limited to 4 techniques.)[/spoiler][spoiler=Witch App Sheet]Character's Name in Witch Runes (you can use this site to get the Runes in an adequate size, though you'll have to punch them in one at a time. The Witch runes should appear directly under the chibi Mami; just copy them and plant them over all this text)

 

Personal Information:

 

Witch's Title: The Witch of ______ (replace the underscores with something sensible)

Barrier Description: (4 lines min. This should give you a chance to guide the Magical Girls into your character's lair)

Appearance: (4 lines min. per paragraph. You can include the appearance of Familiars as well, but you can have only two types of familiars. Oh, and make sure that none of them are humanoid. You can have the humanoid body shape, but that's about as far as you get. Pic rule applies as above with Magical Girls, but good luck finding anything relevant :3)

Personality: (6 lines min. per paragraph. Again, you can describe Familiar personality too)

 

Combat Information:

 

Fighting Style: (How your Witch and her Familiars fend off anyone else in their Barrier)

Power: (Your character's power in (great) detail. Witches' powers don't have to be remotely similar to those of the Magical Girls they spawned from; they can even be the polar opposite if you so choose.)

Weakness(es): (This is especially necessary if your Witch is not meant to be beatable via. brute force, although the Familiars won't last long when swamped with Magical Girl WOC's. You can include multiple weaknesses, which is encouraged for the insanely powerful ones)

Technique(s): (In case you wanna be fancy with your Witch. Optional, but limited to 4 techniques.)[/spoiler]

 

Current Characters:

 

[spoiler=Takara Rumiko]Untitled3_zps7f3e5895.png

"I wish that, every time the stars shine in the sky, I'll still be alive to see their magnificent beauty."

 

Personal Information:

 

Role in Fic: Main Protagonist

Age: 13

Date of Birth: November 12

Blood Type: B-

Appearance: Although she's tall for a 13-year-old girl, Takara only stands at 5' 4". She also has a straight body-type, with a BWH ratio of 25-23-24. Takara is always seen with a parasol over her when she's outside, although it seems to turn into a giant mace when she turns into a Magical Girl. This parasol-turned-mace is significantly larger than the ones she summons, roughly 5 times the size. However's Takara's body grows significantly more muscular during the transformation sequence, giving her a more ideal frame in which to wield the gargantuan weapon, and she also wears an armored dress in her complete Magical Girl form, which covers her from neck to toe, and especially protects her heart. Her Soul Gem, which she keeps in her cleavage, is black in color, which makes it impossibly difficult to tell if it needs cleansing of despair or not. The only way to tell that she's starting to fall into despair is once the gem begins to crack, which usually means it's too late to save her.

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Personality: Currently suffering from advanced case of amnesia, Takara remembers very little at all about how she lived her life. She doesn't remember ever having a childhood, and she doesn't remember growing up either. However, she's slowly starting to learn the basics again, starting with fighting Familiars and Witches again. She's prone to making rookie mistakes at this stage, though, and she's yet to remember what she wished for. There are things about Takara that never change about her; chief among which is that she'll always blame herself for everything that goes wrong, regardless of whether or not she actually had anything to do with it. She's also quick to regret any mistake she makes, no matter the size. Takara's personality is a recipe for disaster as a Magical Girl, and for this reason, she's often regarded to as a ticking time bomb by the others. However, she just so manages to keep herself together long enough to cleanse her despair with a Grief Seed. How she manages this is unknown.

 

Combat Information:

 

Weapon of Choice: Mace

Power: Takara's wish gives her a couple powers, because of its somewhat two-fold nature. First and foremost is her ability, once she remembers it, to surround any maces that she summons with light, and transform them into shooting stars once she throws them. Second, while there's a starry night in the Earth sky, Takara becomes unable to be killed or fall into despair, as these contradict with her wish. She tends to fight Witches at night for this reason, after she remembers what she wished for of course.

Techniques:

Nuclear Star Head: Takara uses the mace that her parasol turns into, surrounding it with light and transforming it into a shooting star upon throwing it as per usual. However, what makes this one different is that it's so powerful that it lets off an Ultima-style explosion when it collides with any matter. It consumes a ton of Takara's mana, but it's a one-shot kill to anyone weaker than the standard Witch.

Starlight Flash: Like when using her power, Takara surrounds some of her maces with light. However, instead of throwing them at a Witch, Familiar or enemy Magical Girl, she tosses them into the air instead, in which they end up levitating and illuminating the area around them.

[/spoiler][spoiler=Galina Hikari (WIP)]Untitled4_zpsad06994d.png

"I wish I could protect my lil' sister... and drown anyone that even thinks about touching her!"

 

Personal Information:

 

Role in Fic: Supporting Character

Age: 15

Date of Birth: October 18

Blood Type: O

Appearance: Galina stands at about 5' 9", and has a BWH ratio of 29-20-27. She doesn't wear a whole lot to show off this form, as she doesn't seem to want to attract unnecessary attention. Aside from her Magical Girl outfit, which is as shown below, Galina is only really seen in her school uniform, which consists of a simple red skirt and white blouse. She doesn't have a Soul Gem yet, but once Kyubey creates it for her, it will likely take the form of a necklace that with what appear to be plenty of sapphires. The shield that forms on Galina's left hand is a basic one, and is only really effective at blocking psychical strikes.

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Personality: As much as she tries to be assertive of herself and her friends, Galina ends up being more passive aggressive instead, unable to find that fine line that makes her properly assertive. Galina is rather timid around boys, and gets even more intimidated when she realizes someone has a crush on her. However, she's brave when it counts, and is especially protective of her little sister Elison.

 

Combat Information:

 

Weapon of Choice: Halberd

Power:[/spoiler][spoiler=Amaya Zawanaga]Untitled5_zpsebf485aa.png

"Me? I just wish I can push away anyone I don't want near me, and I also wish I can drag towards me those that try to escape my wrath!"

 

Personal Information:

 

Role in Fic: Anti Hero

Age: [acronym='Amaya appears to be 21 however, and this would have been her true age if not for the fact that Magical Girls cannot grow older.']16[/acronym]

Date of Birth: May 5

Blood Type: AB+

Appearance: Like Galina, Amaya stands at 5' 9" and has a perfect hourglass figure, though her specifics are 31-20-31. However, unlike Galina, Amaya tends to actually show this figure off in the way she dresses. She almost always keeps her attire formal at all times, and will brush off any dirt, dust or grime that happens to get on the dress that she wears at the time. She doesn't do the same when she gets splashed by someone else's blood, oddly enough; even when it drips down into her cleavage, she'll make no attempt to clean it up. Unlike the other Magical Girls, Amaya never seems to engage into a Magical Transformation, but the pupils in her eyes glow white when she uses her power and techniques. Amaya's Soul Gem takes the form of a large emerald that manifests her upper back.

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Personality: Amaya is a veteran Magical Girl who, in her mind at least, can best anyone that she happens to engage, whether it be Witch or rival Magical Girl. She has a decent mound of experience under her belt, but unfortunately that also comes with arrogance; uncommon in young women, but she obviously radiates of it. Then there's her motto in combat, in that she'll "sacrifice any piece on the chess board to take the queen." Amaya considers her own life well above that of any other Magical Girl that happens to be fighting the same Witch, and if there's any Magical Girl that she finds annoying or believes is going to die anyway, then she won't even hesitate to use that girl as an emergency meat shield if need be, via using her powers to drag that girl to a location where her body would intercept the attack of the Witch. Aside from her own life, Amaya values Grief Seeds as long as they can still absorb despair from her Soul Gem, especially those dropped from a freshly slain Witch. As such, she'll try to get to those first, and will openly challenge anyone that manages to beat her to the punch... as poor a decision it maybe in hindsight.

 

Combat Information:

 

Weapon of Choice: Katana

Power: Amaya can construct vortexes at will, that push and pull objects of any kind in any direction at any speed. She can guide the vortexes she constructs by the motion of a hand or an arm, and the faster she flicks said arm or hand, the faster the object that she constructed a vortex on moves.

Techniques:

Wall of Swords: Amaya aligns the thousands of katanas she summons so they make a wall large enough to block any attack. Then, if the wall remains perfectly intact, she constructs a vortex that pushes the wall straight into enemies in its path.

Paralyzing Vortex: Here, Amaya constructs two vortexes at the some time, one that would push her target one direction and one that would pull the target in another. These two forces practically cancel each other, not only freezing the target on the spot, but also putting tremendous strain on the target's body. This is Amaya's most powerful technique, but it consumes lot of her mana; almost enough to bring her into despair.

Blade Rain: Summoning as many katanas as she can wrap her hands around, Amaya tosses them all up in the air, before using a vortex to rotate them to where they'd point towards an enemy, and then a separate one to push them forward.[/spoiler][spoiler=The Witch of Transparency (WIP)]

 

Personal Information:

 

Role in Fic: Boss

Witch's Title: The Witch of Transparency

Barrier Description:

Appearance:

Personality:

 

Combat Information:

 

Fighting Style:

Power:

Weakness(es):

Technique(s): [/spoiler][spoiler=LERNA, The Witch of Infinite Possibilities (WIP)]l2.pnge2.pngr2.pngn2.pnga2.png

 

Personal Information:

 

Role in Fic: Final Boss

Witch's Title: The Witch of Infinite Possibilities

Barrier Description:

Appearance: Manual Description to come

[spoiler=PIC (That's right, I has an image of LERNA. Kudos goes to MI for making it.)]5poaoh.jpg[/spoiler]

Personality:

 

Combat Information:

 

Fighting Style:

Power:

Weakness(es):

Technique(s): [/spoiler]

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I figured that setting it before Madoka's wish would be the safe route, but the reason I'm reluctant about it is because everyone that's ever done a PMMM fanfic has set it at that time, I suspect. Then again, the third movie will probably give me the info I need to know. I'll have to watch it on YouTube or something :/

 

As for you sucking at names, you can't be as bad as me. When I was making LERNA for Merciful's PMMM RP, I was just about to call her Nurburgring out of the inability to come up with anything else. I'm glad I asked Merciful for a better one though, 'cause otherwise the other RPers that looked at LERNA's app would be like "O_o"

 

And I probably would've hung my head in shame.

 

...

 

I can do everything else about a Witch with literally no problems at all. It's just the names that always screwed me over.

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  • 3 weeks later...

MAJOR UPDATE IS MAJOR!!

 

As you can tell by my new sig, I've already begun launching the PMMM fanfic. Sig contains the link. I'm going to start putting up an app sheet for Magical Girls and Witches alike, but so far, I've got a couple Witches that I intend to be involved as well as some Magical Girls (I'll put them up at the same time), however...

 

- I could use some ideas for the first boss Witch. I don't wanna use the one that may've been foreshadowed in Chapter 1 yet, but I might use it as the second or third one instead, depending on my mood. Speaking of which, the first boss Witch will be fought in Chapter 2

- LERNA will be the final boss of the fic, but unlike last time, she will not form from Galina Hikari. I have a different, more suitable Magical Girl for that role now :3

- A handful more Magical Girls could be useful overall, even though I maybe focusing on Takara, Galina and the third Magical Girl I've invested until about half-way through. I'd rather not have too many Magical Girls, probably 8 at the most, and if I get more, I'll kill them off quickly.

- Takara Rumiko will fight several Witches before remembering what her powers are. I haven't decided whether I want her to beat 3 or 4 beforehand, but I'll probably need a Witch be suggested that must be beaten by using one's brain. Veruka from PMYM might be a candidate for such a Witch.

- While submitting character ideas, PLEASE DO NOT MAKE BIOS FOR THEM!! I will make my own bios for them if I want to based on their personality and wishes... or if they're Witches, I'll decide which Magical Girl they evolve from or if they appear from nowhere.

- Plus I just finished the app sheet. Enjoy your ability to make Witches and Magical Girls.

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