Darthakin Posted December 9, 2013 Report Share Posted December 9, 2013 EDIT is in BOLD (RANK 6!) Simple as it is... It's a chaos version of Number 33. [attachment=40089:createcard.jpg] Lore: 3 level 6 monsters. If this card has "Number 33: OOparts super weapon - Machu Mach" as an XYZ material, it gains the following effect: Once per turn, by detaching all XYZ materials from this card, you can reduce the ATK of monsters up to the amount of XYZ materials detached to 0. Then, this card gains attack equal to the total amount of ATK lost by this effect. During the end phase of the turn you used this effect, if this card attacked, you take damage equal to half the amount of ATK this card gained through its effect. (Not sure how the phrase the last part. "ATK lost"? Help?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted December 9, 2013 Report Share Posted December 9, 2013 first of all u missed about its lv, every Cno. have 1 higher lv than its original, but machu mach lv. is only 5, so this one lv. should be 6, second, the correct name of no.33 in TCG should be "Number 33: Chronomaly Machu Mech" (OOParts is Chronomaly's OCG names), finally, Overlay Unit is also OCG, it should be "Xyz Material", well i cant fix all of that for u but i pointed some important part, hope someone will fix it for u soon. its effect is very powerful if use in the right field, such as when facing Dragon Rulers or sth like that, this card can easily deal an OTK dmg by this effect, u should have some drawbacks for that effect to balance it, such as "Your opponent take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card the turn you activate this effect" or maybe "This card gains ATK ... this effect (max 2000)" well, if ignore mistakes and balances i think it was a nice upgrade of no.33 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted December 9, 2013 Report Share Posted December 9, 2013 @above Machu Mech is not lv.5, it's Rank 5 as -Someone- mentioned, that's attack drain effect is too OP and u need to do something about that. about its OCG i think i can do it: 3 level 6 monsters. (also its rank should be 6 if u really want to make a Chaos version of No.33 that was rank 5) If this card has "Number 33: Chronomaly Machu Mech" as an Xyz Material, it gains this effect: Once per turn: You can detach all Xyz Materials from this card to target as many other face-up monsters on the field as possible, but not more than the number of Xyz Materials that were attached to this card before you activate this effect; this card gains ATK equal to the total ATK of the targets, then those targets' ATK become 0. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthakin Posted December 9, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2013 first of all u missed about its lv, every Cno. have 1 higher lv than its original, but machu mach lv. is only 5, so this one lv. should be 6, second, the correct name of no.33 in TCG should be "Number 33: Chronomaly Machu Mech" (OOParts is Chronomaly's OCG names), finally, Overlay Unit is also OCG, it should be "Xyz Material", well i cant fix all of that for u but i pointed some important part, hope someone will fix it for u soon. its effect is very powerful if use in the right field, such as when facing Dragon Rulers or sth like that, this card can easily deal an OTK dmg by this effect, u should have some drawbacks for that effect to balance it, such as "Your opponent take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card the turn you activate this effect" or maybe "This card gains ATK ... this effect (max 2000)" well, if ignore mistakes and balances i think it was a nice upgrade of no.33 :) @above Machu Mech is not lv.5, it's Rank 5 as -Someone- mentioned, that's attack drain effect is too OP and u need to do something about that. about its OCG i think i can do it: 3 level 6 monsters. (also its rank should be 6 if u really want to make a Chaos version of No.33 that was rank 5) If this card has "Number 33: Chronomaly Machu Mech" as an Xyz Material, it gains this effect: Once per turn: You can detach all Xyz Materials from this card to target as many other face-up monsters on the field as possible, but not more than the number of Xyz Materials that were attached to this card before you activate this effect; this card gains ATK equal to the total ATK of the targets, then those targets' ATK become 0. First of all; I honestly couldn't care less for the ocg of OOParts. Chronomaly is a lame name. But yea, I know Machu Mach is called "chronomaly Machu mach" God... Why did I put 7? O.o Must've had in my head that I was making a chaos of a chaos or something, cause I sure as hell wouldn't mistake Machu's level :p (seriously, I adore OOParts). The effect should indeed need some kind of Drawback... hmm... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted December 9, 2013 Report Share Posted December 9, 2013 @above Machu Mech is not lv.5, it's Rank 5 damn, im more confused than TC XD First of all; I honestly couldn't care less for the ocg of OOParts. Chronomaly is a lame name. But yea, I know Machu Mach is called "chronomaly Machu mach" God... Why did I put 7? O.o Must've had in my head that I was making a chaos of a chaos or something, cause I sure as hell wouldn't mistake Machu's level :P (seriously, I adore OOParts). The effect should indeed need some kind of Drawback... hmm... oh well, but yea its rank should make it be Number CC33 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthakin Posted December 10, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2013 damn, im more confused than TC XD oh well, but yea its rank should make it be Number CC33 lol I'm sure the anime is going to do that. Make an ever bigger Chaos level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted December 10, 2013 Report Share Posted December 10, 2013 To be honest, aside from depowering the OTK-potential effect, I would say it need an additional effect for when its not Ranked Up from the original N33. Even C6 and Utopia V has a normal effect. Also, if you nerfed the effect, I guess it need some more ATK. For a Rank 6 C Number, 2700 is quite underwhelming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_engineer Posted December 10, 2013 Report Share Posted December 10, 2013 basically it's a one time beater: OTK your opponent or OTK yourself Just remember to clean the backrow, it would be bad to see a chained Threatening Roar there... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthakin Posted December 10, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2013 That would certainly suck big time. Actually, Even a Negate attack would suck, ... Oh, Magical Cylinder... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted December 10, 2013 Report Share Posted December 10, 2013 if your card want an extremely high stat, it's ordinary for it to take cylinder or sth like that @Engineer how u OTK urself? even this card failed to atk during the turn it detach, it still a over 10000 vanilla since its effect is permanent. also if i were that card's user, i will just w8 for next turn to atk then i didnt take any damage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthakin Posted December 10, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2013 See, it even offers room for tactic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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