Crushing Mechatronic Volt Generator

[Anti-Apocryphal]

 

2 Level 6 monsters
Can only be Summoned by Xyz Summon. The ATK of this card is equal to the average ATK of the attached Xyz materials. Once per turn: You can discard 1 Xyz material; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your Graveyard; negate its effect(s). If this card has no Xyz material, its ATK is equal to the combined ATK of all cards on your side of the field.

 

[spoiler="Additional Comments"]

 

This picture might be from an archive, but I'm not 100% sure. I just took the picture from a previously made card of mine and transplanted it onto this one (everything about this card is different from the one I took the image from...except the image).

 

I think the effect is overall simple and balanced. Will +Like any really good reviews.

 

Oh, also, I don't know if "Xyz material" in the last part of the effect is "Xyz materials," so if you know, please let me know. [/spoiler]

[Slinky]

..My eyes are bleeding from this. First of all, you don't discard Xyz Materials. Second, this is how you would word that ATK increase.

 

"The ATK of this card is equal to half of the combined ATK of this cards Xyz Materials."

 

Other than that, I'm not really seeing that many issues.

[Darj]

Suggested OCG fix (including Dyson's fix):

 

Must be Xyz Summoned, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. While this card has Xyz Material, its ATK is equal to half of the combined ATK of its Xyz Materials. While this card has no Xyz Material, its ATK is equal to the combined ATK of all other monsters you control. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card to target 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target. Its effects are negated.

 

 

On the effect, I think the card is apparently fine, but I still don't see which deck could take full advantage of its both effects, as I cannot think of a deck that runs both Level 6s and Level 4 or lower DARKs.