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2 New XYZ cards, Enjoy!


Dark Shadows Ninja

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Not bad, but I do have a couple of issues.

 

OCG: I think it's okay, I think Fire Tiger might have an issue but I'm not so wise in the OCG stuff.

 

I think Honeybird is ehh. I mean it has to be worth bringing it out. When you compare it to Tri-Edge Levia, I think Levia wins even though it has lower ATK and what not. The thing about this card is that what if your opponent doesn't run any continuous spell/trap or run a field spell? This card would be useless and the 2200 ATK won't do you much good. 

 

I think Tiger isn't really good at all. First off it takes 4 materials....4!.... Most of the time no one can even summon it. The thing that makes it worse is that it might not even be worth summoning. It's basically a Leviathan Dragon that requires 4 level 4s and can attack directly. Also, the card can be blown up right after it summons: Bottomless, Device, Solemn, etc. and it would just be a huge waste of 4 monsters.

 

 

 

 

My fixes:

 

Honeybird:

3 level 3 monsters

Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 Spell or Trap card your opponent controls; destroy it, and if you do: Return 1 monster on the field to the owner's hand. This card cannot attack your opponent directly this turn.

 

Tiger:

4 level 4 monsters

The summoning of this card cannot be negated. If this card was summoned to the field, your opponent cannot activate any card effects until your Battle Phase. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 1 monster on the field: That monster gains 500 ATK. 

 

*(Tiger's ATK is also changed to 2500 and DEF to 2800)*

 

 

 

Again, I'm not so big on the OCG so I can't really touch it up perfectly for you.

 

ALSO! Don't forget to type your effects below your cards. I don't know if the rule about the post being locked if you don't do that is still up, but I would do it just in case.

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Tiger:

4 level 4 monsters

The summoning of this card cannot be negated. If this card was summoned to the field, your opponent cannot activate any card effects until your Battle Phase. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 1 monster on the field: That monster gains 500 ATK. 

 

*(Tiger's ATK is also changed to 2500 and DEF to 2800)*

 

I have to agree with you there, my first thought while looking at Tiger was just that it was a harder to get out Leviathan, but your ideas definitely make it considerably more worthwhile to use.

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