Mega Charizard X (Sick Concept)

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Mega Charizard X is simply devastating with his ability to rip through weaker monsters while still causing damage to your opponents life points. He also has another ability to negate an effect that would destroy him, but be careful because once he's done using his material he de-evolves to his original form



Lore:1 Charizard + 1 Level 10 Fire monster
If this card attacks a Defense Position monster inflict battle piercing damage to your opponent. During either players turn you can detach 1 material from this card to negate a cards effect that would destroy this card. If this card has no materials attach; special summon 1 Charizard from the graveyard and banish this card during the End Phase.

ATK/3300 DEF/2000


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No comments ?

[Heirofdrills]

Interesting take, I would have done maybe a fusion monster akin to the mask change cards in the E-Hero archetype (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mask_Change) only, instead of mask change, it would be a card like, "Mega Evolve", or "Mega Stone" and have it be banished on the end phase at the end of the second or third turn after it's summon, and could only negate destruction once per turn. That's just what I would do though, since it seems kind of weird to make it an XYZ monster. 

 

There's also a typo: "If this card has no materials attach;" isn't correct grammar and is kind of weird to use for YuGiOh effects, I would use "When this card has no material," using Utopia as a reference (http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Number_39:_Utopia)

 

I do like its ATK and DEF though, it's cool while still being fair.

 

The only other thing I would change is that it would probably make more sense if it were a Dragon type.

 

I like the card though, and the effect is written legibly and understandably. The illustration is clear and cool as well.

 

Nice card :)

[a_guy]

Dat looks like a black shiny fairy or butterfly, not a charizard

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I guess it's alright. Can't really comment on it because it requires Charizard, and we don't know what it does.

 

You could make it

"2 Level 10 monsters

You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a "Charizard" you control as the Xyz Material."

That way, it would be easier to summon, and we would be able help you make it better. Also, isn't Mega Charizard X a Dragon? I understand making Charizard or Mega Charizard Y a Winged Beast, but X could be a dragon.

 

For now, it's dependent on how good Charizard is.

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[quote name="a_guy" post="6335236" timestamp="1389490474"]Dat looks like a black shiny fairy or butterfly, not a charizard[/quote] No offense but are you retarted ?

[quote name="The Scarlet Witch" post="6335242" timestamp="1389491861"]I guess it's alright. Can't really comment on it because it requires Charizard, and we don't know what it does.   You could make it "2 Level 10 monsters You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a "Charizard" you control as the Xyz Material." That way, it would be easier to summon, and we would be able help you make it better. Also, isn't Mega Charizard X a Dragon? I understand making Charizard or Mega Charizard Y a Winged Beast, but X could be a dragon.   For now, it's dependent on how good Charizard is.[/quote] Why make it easier to summon that would make it OP and don't focus on Charizard because obviously it's not made yet gotta use your imagination and if you can't do that just focus on this cards effect art work and overall design. Don't stray away from judging this card by itself by including other unknown variables. But thanks for not rating like I asked you to.

[quote name="Heirofdrills" post="6335232" timestamp="1389489175"]Interesting take, I would have done maybe a fusion monster akin to the mask change cards in the E-Hero archetype ([url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mask_Change]http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mask_Change[/url]) only, instead of mask change, it would be a card like, "Mega Evolve", or "Mega Stone" and have it be banished on the end phase at the end of the second or third turn after it's summon, and could only negate destruction once per turn. That's just what I would do though, since it seems kind of weird to make it an XYZ monster.    There's also a typo: "If this card has no materials attach;" isn't correct grammar and is kind of weird to use for YuGiOh effects, I would use "When this card has no material," using Utopia as a reference ([url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Number_39:_Utopia]http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Number_39:_Utopia[/url])   I do like its ATK and DEF though, it's cool while still being fair.   The only other thing I would change is that it would probably make more sense if it were a Dragon type.   I like the card though, and the effect is written legibly and understandably. The illustration is clear and cool as well.   Nice card :)[/quote] Thank you :)

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No offense but are you retarted ?

Why make it easier to summon that would make it OP and don't focus on Charizard because obviously it's not made yet gotta use your imagination and if you can't do that just focus on this cards effect art work and overall design. Don't stray away from judging this card by itself by including other unknown variables. But thanks for not rating like I asked you to.

Thank you :)

 

Focus on the card itself? Alright, its a 3300 Piercer that dodges destruction, and gets destroyed when it has no materials. It also needs a card that doesn't exist (yet) to summon, plus a Level 10 Fire Monster. Last time I checked, there are only 6 Level 10 Monsters. Jurrac Meteoar is limited to Jurracs, Ultimate Obedient Fiend is useless, and Uria, Lord of Searing Flames needs a deck dedicated to him. That leaves Trident Dragion and Metaion, the Timelord. Dragion is useable, if you run Dragons. Which leaves Metaion as the best option. Even then Charizard does not exist, which makes this card unplayable. so, for now, 2/5. 1 because it's unplayable, and 1 because you made me comment.

 

If you want to make it better, you could just make 2 Level FIRE Monsters, and make able to summon itself by using Charizard as a material. It would be a bit more difficult to summon it, but it would reward you for running Charizard. If you were to make it more playable, it would have gotten a 3/5, maybe even 4/5.

 

And, before calling someone retarded, make sure you spell retarded correctly

[Heirofdrills]

He could just use level manipulation stuff, like Gagagas. Or maybe he'll make a card called "Mega Stone" that let's you target an XYZ monster in your extra deck who shares then name of a monster on the field and special summon that monster using the card on the field and this card as xyz material? It'd be worded a bit differently, but that would be cool. 

 

I agree that it's only as great as the sum of it's parts, but you gotta work with what you got, and I'm sure you can assume he's going to make some support for it, so I think it could be viable. Besides, if you wanna make a pokemon deck, and the evolutions aren't extra deck monsters, then it's not like he needs the extra deck space anyway :P

 

Although the whole "Are you retarded" thing was a little harsh and uncalled for too. 

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[quote name="The Scarlet Witch" post="6335877" timestamp="1389571017"]Focus on the card itself? Alright, its a 3300 Piercer that dodges destruction, and gets destroyed when it has no materials. It also needs a card that doesn't exist (yet) to summon, plus a Level 10 Fire Monster. Last time I checked, there are only 6 Level 10 Monsters. Jurrac Meteoar is limited to Jurracs, Ultimate Obedient Fiend is useless, and Uria, Lord of Searing Flames needs a deck dedicated to him. That leaves Trident Dragion and Metaion, the Timelord. Dragion is useable, if you run Dragons. Which leaves Metaion as the best option. Even then Charizard does not exist, which makes this card unplayable. so, for now, 2/5. 1 because it's unplayable, and 1 because you made me comment.   If you want to make it better, you could just make 2 Level FIRE Monsters, and make able to summon itself by using Charizard as a material. It would be a bit more difficult to summon it, but it would reward you for running Charizard. If you were to make it more playable, it would have gotten a 3/5, maybe even 4/5.   And, before calling someone retarded, make sure you spell retarded correctly[/quote] 1 cause I made you comment !!?? You a hater lmao!!!

[Trebuchet MS]

Rather unorthodox way of summoning an Xyz Monster. Perhaps make a "Mega Stone" Spell that will let you Mega-evolve the original Charizard to MegaZard X, or tweak the requirements so that it matches existing Xyz Monster summoning mechanics. If you do the latter, give MegaZard X a bonus effect if the original Charizard is one of its Xyz Materials.

 

The lore change I will apply will reflect what happens if, say, you attempt the latter...

(Rank 6)

1 Charizard + 1 Level 10 Fire monster 2 Level 6 FIRE monsters
If this card attacks a Defense Position monster while it has "Charizard" as an Xyz Material, inflict battle piercing battle damage to your opponent. During either player's turn, when a card effect that would destroy this card is activated: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; to negate the activation a cards effect that would destroy this card. During the End Phase, if this card has no Xyz Materials attach; : special summon Target 1 "Charizard" from the in your Graveyard; and Special Summon that target, also banish this card during the End Phase.

The little issue I see is that if you have Imperial Iron Wall in play this card stays on the field despite having no Xyz Material, effectively becoming a constant Charizard resurrection engine. Maybe change "banish" to "send to the Graveyard", since the latter is far harder to prevent.