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Parting Shot Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Love the pics!! The OCG (Original Card Grammar) is a little off, but pretty good for a beginner. The idea is very nice, also. overall - 12.82/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{XxX}The_wolf Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 really nice pictures bad OCG but good job for first cards 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Ill rate your cards as a new member 7.895/10 <<< That is for a new member. Work on your OCG. Add disclaimers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HerovsFiend Posted March 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 really nice pictures bad OCG but good job for first cards 8/10 could someone tell me my ocg mistakes i plan on making more of these:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Add disclaimers ^Yes. I forgot to mention that in my post. Man, I keep forgetting to do that today....>_< Anyway, OCG fixes: Emperor- "When this card destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard by battle, each player selects 1 monster in their Graveyard and places it on the bottom of their Deck." Knight- "When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Demon Knight of the Underworld" from your Deck in face-up Attack Position." Hero- "Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points and discard all cards in your hand to destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field." "Sword- "This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Hero" in it's card name. The equipped monster gains 300 ATK. When the equipped monster inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points, your opponent randomly discards 1 card from their hand." I think that is correct. Hope it helps ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HerovsFiend Posted March 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Add disclaimers ^Yes. I forgot to mention that in my post. Man' date=' I keep forgetting to do that today....>_< Anyway, OCG fixes: Emperor- "When this card destroys a monster and sends it to the Graveyard by battle, each player selects one monster in their Graveyard and places it on the bottom of their Deck." Knight- "When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Demon Knight of the Underworld" from your Deck in face-up Attack Position." Hero- "Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points and discard all cards in your hand to destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field." "Sword- "This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Hero" in it's card name. The equipped monster gains 300 ATK. When the equipped monster inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points, your opponent randomly discards 1 card from their hand." I think that is correct. Hope it helps ^_^[/quote'] thx!:D ill fix them right away and hope i do better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 thx!:D ill fix them right away and hope i do better. You're welcome! Always happy to help ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megakenny Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 yeh it's great OCG is a little bit off so 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loren Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 great cards 9/10 should of made them out of koalas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 6.5/10-Blessed Soul Sword is overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 error's overused pic's (Apocalypse used them) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 browarod mentioned it all. not too much to say... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 very good for first cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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