casaditymaker Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 [align=center][font=Trebuchet MS][img]http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/5669/freyahdj7.jpg[/img] [u][color=#800000]Freyah, the Shattering Sovereign[/color][/u] WFP-001 [color=#FF0000]FIRE[/color] Level: 4 ATK: 1700 DEF: 1100 [b]EFFECT[/b]: [i]When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summoned, or Flip Summoned, discard 1 FIRE monster from your hand to the Graveyard. If you do not have a FIRE monster to discard, destroy this monster. Each time this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, add 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard to your hand.[/i] ----- This card is a part of my new set called "Wondering Fire Princess". It's effect doesn't sound ALL too good, but with cards from the set, it will make it a great card. My new set deals with FIRE monsters, and some Pyro too, and hopefully it will become a popular set :P ----- I do NOT own the artwork of this card. The person who does is on this website: http://freyah.deviantart.com/art/Fire-Ash-1908111 Thank you Freyah for the picture :P[/font][/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 It's "send", not "discard", and "by battle", not "as a result of battle". Anyways, pretty good! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casaditymaker Posted March 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Thanks, I will fix it tectonix55 :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Its an investment effect, you can get back the same thing that you were required to give. Im abit bias against these kind of effects [just sounds kind of cheap] but at least yours has to do some killing first, and ATK isnt over the top so 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casaditymaker Posted March 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Yah, I wanted to make it a little overbalanced since it is the main card in my set, so yah, and thanks Faded :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 Since you've pretty much included every kind of summoning, you could probably just shorten it to "When this card is summoned" rather than listing all of them individually. Otherwise, a very nice card!! overall - 13.44/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
72night Posted March 19, 2008 Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 ^ Agreed with browarod. Since you included all the summonings, just say Summoned, ^_^. Also, "If you do not have a FIRE monster to discard, destroy this monster." Better to say, "If you cannot, destroy this monster." The card is still great. ^_^Also, kinda surprised it isn't a Casadity card. X] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casaditymaker Posted March 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2008 lol, thanks guys :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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