Simping For Hina Posted January 20, 2014 Report Share Posted January 20, 2014 Monsters Advanced Gemini-Beast Earth Level 4 Machine / Effect If you control more than 1 "Advanced" monster: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. During your Battle Phase, the turn this card was Summoned: You can Special Summon 1 "Advanced Token" (Machine-Type / EARTH / Level 4/ ATK 1000 / DEF 0). Once per turn: You can discard 1 card; Return 1 card from your Graveyard to your Deck. ATK 1800 / DEF 1400 Advanced Double Crush Earth Level 4 Machine / Effect Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is Summoned: Banish 1 card from your Graveyard. During your Battle Phase: You can halve the ATK of this card; This card can attack twice per turn. Once per turn: You can send 1 card from your Deck to the Graveyard; Destroy 1 card on the field. When this card is destroyed: Banish it instead. ATK 2000 / DEF 1200 Advanced Circuitier Earth Level 4 Machine / Effect This card inflicts piercing damage. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. During the turn after this card was Summoned: You can add 1 card from you Deck to your hand. After that, you must skip your next Draw Phase. Once per turn: You can discard 1 card from your hand; Increase the ATK of this monster by 300. ATK 1700 / DEF 1500 Advanced Big-Boulder Earth Level 4 Machine / Tuner This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. This card cannot attack directly. If this card is Normal Summoned after your Battle Phase: Draw 1 card. If this card is the target of an attack: You can discard 1 card; Negate the attack. Once per turn; you can destroy 1 card you control; Randomly pick 1 card from your opponent's hand; Send it to the Banished Zone ATK 1800 / DEF 1500 Advanced Armed-Striker Earth Level 4 Machine / Effect Neither players can Special Summon monsters the turn this card was Summoned. If your opponent activates any Spell or Trap Card: You can Banish this card; Negate the effect and destroy the card. At the End Phase the turn this effect was activated: Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn: You can return 1 Spell or Trap Card from the Graveyard to your Deck. ATK 1400 / DEF 2000 Advanced Aqua-Healer Earth Level 4 Machine / Effect Increase the DEF of each Machine-Type monster you control by 300. During your Battle Phase: You can discard your entire hand; Any damage take this turn is reduced to 0. During your Draw Phase: You can send the card you drew to the Graveyard; Return 1 card in the Graveyard to your Deck. Once per turn: You can Banish 2 cards in the Graveyard; Draw 1 card. ATK 1000 / DEF 2000 Advanced Point-Black Earth Level 4 Machine / Effect Cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. If you control no monsters and your opponent controls 2 or more monsters; You can Special Summon this card from your Deck. When this card attacks a monster your opponent control: Target 1 monster on the field; Destroy that target and this card. Once per turn; You can decrease your Life Points by 1000; Add 1 card from your Deck to your hand. ATK 1600 / DEF 1300 Advanced Mega-Arm Earth Level 4 Machine / Tuner When this card is Summoned: You can increase the ATK of 1 Machine-Type monster you control by 500 until this card leaves the field. Once per turn: You can discard 1 card; Destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is destroyed by battle: Add 1 Machine-Type monster from your Deck to your Hand. Shuffle your deck. That card cannot be activated or Summoned until your next Main Phase. ATK 1900 / DEF 1000 Advanced Long-Shot Earth Level 4 Machine / Tuner Any ATK increase to this card is permanent. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. During your Battle Phase: You can halve the ATK of this monster: Attack your opponent directly. Once per turn: You can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster. You can only control 1 "Advanced Long-Shot". ATK 1300 / DEF 1600 Advanced Ichor-Claw Earth Level 4 Machine / Effect During your Main Phase, the turn this card was Normal Summone: You cannot acticate any Spell Cards. When this card attacks any monster your opponent controls: Destroy 1 card on the field. Increase the ATK of this card by 500 during Damage Step, only the turn this card attacked. Once per turn: You can discard 1 card; Banish 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard. ATK 1800 / DEF 1000 Extra Monsters Advanced Flying-Shock Earth Level 8 Machine / Synchro / Effect 1 Machine-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Summoned (from your Extra Deck): Add 1 card from your Deck to your hand. Once per turn: You can return 1 card from your Graveyard to your Deck. Your Deck is then shuffled. During your End Phase: You can Banish 1 card from your Graveyard; Destroy 1 card your opponent controls. ATK 2800 / DEF 2500 Advanced Iron-Claw Earth Rank 4 Machine / Xyz / Effect 2 or more Level 4 "Advanced" monsters Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Destroy 1 card your opponent controls. Until the End Phase this effect was activated: Your opponent cannot active any Monster Card Effects. When this card has no Xyz Material: Decrease its ATK by 500; This card cannot attack directly. ATK 2500 / DEF 1500 Spells Advanced Head Quarters Field Spell Increase the ATK and DEF of all Machine-Type monsters you control by 500. Each time a card is sent to your Graveyard by any "Advanced" monsters: Destroy 1 card your opponent controls. You can skip your Draw Phase: Inflict up 1000 damage to selected monster or player. Every time you Summon an "Advanced" monster: Destroy 1 card you control or Banish the top card of your Deck. Pay 500 Life Points each turn during your End Phase to keep this card on the field. Advanced Free-Fire Equip Spell This card can only be equipped to a Level 4 or higher Machine-Type monster you control. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK. If this card is equipped to an "Advanced" monster: Increase its ATK by another 200 and it gains the following effect; This card can attack twice per turn. If the monster this card is equipped to is destroyed: Banish this card; Draw 1 card. If this card is Banished by this effect: Destroy 1 card you control. You must pay 1000 Life Points each turn during your End Phase to keep this card on the field. Advanced Charging Station Continuous Spell Every time 1 Machine-Type monster you control is destroyed by battle: You can Special Summon 1 "Advanced Token" (Machine-Type / EARTH / Level 4/ ATK 0 / DEF 0) in face up Defense Position. You can only control up to 3 "Advanced Tokens". Once per turn, while you control 1 "Advanced Token": You can Banish 1 Monster Card from the Graveyard; Target 1 "Advanced Token". It gains the ATK, DEF and effect of the Banished Monster Card. Once this card is sent to the Graveyard: Destroy every "Advanced Token" on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ShinobiFingers Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Really awesome art! I like the way you impliment the heavy draw-backs on these cards to balance out their effects. A few pieces of constructive criticism... Advanced Circuitier is missing an "r" in "your" for his effect. (silly little mistake, you'll see what I mean) Big Boulder reads "Once per turn;" that semi-colon should be a colon (making it "Once per turn:") It's a condition, not targetting or a cost. I also believe the end of his effect would read "Banish that card" but I could be wrong. Point Blank reads "If you control no monsters and your opponent controls 2 or more monsters;" same error, it's a condition not a cost, therefore the punctuation is misused. Advanced Charging Station reads "Every time 1 Machine-Type monster you control" I feel like it should read "Each time" Advanced Iron-Claw has a colon after the cost of him detaching, which should be a semi-colon. Those are just a few small changes (unless I'm wrong, just going by my understanding). It's late so I may have missed a few things. Thanks for the good read! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Bowie Posted January 31, 2014 Report Share Posted January 31, 2014 10 outta Teeeeeeeeeeen. I like how Elpizo is a synchro, but the other bosses don't even show up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E-Dog Posted January 31, 2014 Report Share Posted January 31, 2014 Niiiiiice all pretty balanced! where is the art from O: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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