Maeriberii Haan Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Cryptically Constructed Melancholy, Sweet Lily of the Valley Level 7 WATER Machine/Fusion/Effect ATK: 2200 DEF: 2700 1 EARTH monster + 1 WATER monster + 1 other monster Can only be Fusion Summoned by sending the above Fusion Materials from your side of the field tp the graveyard (You do not use Polymerization). You cannot summon another monster for the rest of the turn after this card is summoned. If this card is successfully Fusion Summoned; destroy all other monsters on the field during your opponent’s next End Phase. All other monster summoned to the field when this card is face-up on the field have their ATK halved, and is destroyed during the second next End Phase after it being summoned. When this card would be removed from the field, you can discard 1 card and banish 1 WATER and 1 EARTH monster from your graveyard instead. If you do, halve the ATK of all other monsters on the field. -------------------------------------- Kinda curious about how should I word the two time-bomb effects so it's still active even if this card is already gone from the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 OCG Rulers can Summon this. And PROFIT LIKE NO TOMORROW 4 Monsters seems a tad bit high. It's also kind of bad to wait that long just for a field nuke. With low Attack and Defense too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted January 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Hmm, do you think it need some sort of protection effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Needs protection and a pay off. Banish, send to grave instead, SOMETHING that doesn't make Lightning Vortex look better in every way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted January 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Maybe halve any other summoned monster's ATK, then kill them on the next End Phase? Or do you think it'll be better to just reduce the summoning cost? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Summoning cost, And add halving. Maybe halving does something, IDC, it just sounds funny/fitting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted January 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Done. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Not bad. I would let that Third monster be one your opponent controls, for an added twist. Not OP, but just a pain in the butt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted January 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 So it's fine? Thanks! Still want to see other opinions though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Oh yeah, forgot to actually say it. Looks fine. I would run in Machinas. Tin Goldfish is a totally legit reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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