jellal17 Posted January 24, 2014 Report Share Posted January 24, 2014 Fiend/Xyz/Effect 2 level 3 monsters This card gains 100 ATK for each dark monster in your Graveyard.Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card, to target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; it loses 500 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Aix Posted January 27, 2014 Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 That's not even a succubus, that's a kitsune. It's extremely weak and not particularly useful. Leviathan Dragon probably has a better ability to run over stuff and people don't even run that any more. You'd have to increase the ATK loss for it to have any utility. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loyalist Posted January 27, 2014 Report Share Posted January 27, 2014 That's not even a succubus, that's a kitsune. It's extremely weak and not particularly useful. Leviathan Dragon probably has a better ability to run over stuff and people don't even run that any more. You'd have to increase the ATK loss for it to have any utility. I agree with this. Increase the ATK loss or you could make it change the monster to defence position and lower defence (I assume this is supposed to represent it's seductive charms lowering their guard?) - In which case it would make more sense. Another thing to point out is that "dark" should be in caps - e.g. "DARK" same goes for all attributes. Idea is good but execution could do with some work if I am to be honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted January 28, 2014 Report Share Posted January 28, 2014 That's not even a succubus, that's a kitsune. It's extremely weak and not particularly useful. Leviathan Dragon probably has a better ability to run over stuff and people don't even run that any more. You'd have to increase the ATK loss for it to have any utility. That's not a Kitsune. A Kitsune is a wolf with 7 tails. Anyway, to the card: this is really meh... It only helps DARK deck just by getting another beater, and the ATK decrease is pitiful at best. I would at least put it at 1000 or have some other effect like that Monster's effects are negated or something to that effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted January 28, 2014 Report Share Posted January 28, 2014 That's not a Kitsune. A Kitsune is a wolf with 7 tails. No, a kitsune is a fox spirit. They can assume a humanoid form and, starting with just one, the number of tails they have increases over their lifetime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFMegamanlan Posted January 28, 2014 Report Share Posted January 28, 2014 That's not the original mythos of them. That was something added and actually a few other movies, etc. brought some of the ideas of that such as gaining tails. I'm studying the myths around several mythical creatures for a theme I'm making. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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