Darj Posted February 3, 2014 Report Share Posted February 3, 2014 Awakened Gishki Kamilia (Emilia + Kraken) WATER Spellcaster/Xyz/Effect Rank: 4 ATK: 2000 DEF: 1000 2 Level 4 monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: Shuffle 1 random card from your opponent's hand into the Deck. You can only use this effect of "Awakened Gishki Kamilia" once per turn. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and reveal 1 card in your hand; this card gains 400 ATK and is unaffected by your opponent's cards of the same card type (Monster, Spell, or Trap) as the revealed card, until your opponent's End Phase. Appearance: A slightly older "Gishki Emilia" (perhaps 1~2 years) wearing a similar dress to her original, but with a black & white, Sombres/Kerykeion theme like Leoh's Armor. I admit the effect is not exactly creative, as it's just a ripoff of Gustkraken, but as a generic Xyz is should be handy for disrupting the hand, something that, from all the Rank 4s, only Ouroboros and Crazy Box's result #3 can do. [spoiler=Card flavor and useless Trivia]A while ago I wrote an alternate version of "Gishki Avance" who was blessed by Sombre/Kerykeion deity after defeating Sophia and gained the ability of transforming at will into its previous Ritual form (Levianima). I decided to make a similar version of Emilia, who was a survivor as well. - "Awakened" in the card's name refers to Emilia's ability of transforming at will into her Ritual form without the need of the Aquamirror; this ability was "unlocked" after the Ritual was properly casted on her. - Her DEF is the same as Gustkraken's DEF, and her ATK is the average of Emilia + Gustkraken ATK. - After the ATK boost, Kamilia's ATK becomes 2400, the same as Gustkraken, as if Emilia were temporarily transforming into her Ritual form for battling. -The last effect is a reference to the Sombre/Kerykeion armor that, if Leoh can be taken as example, grants protection against effects.[/spoiler] Thoughts? The protection effect is there just for flavor, so if you think it's overkill I'm willing to remove it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted February 5, 2014 Report Share Posted February 5, 2014 A generic Rank 4 that can burn the opponent's hand once per turn, guaranteed, for free, is overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted February 5, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2014 I see. In that case I will change the effect to only once, when the monster is Xyz Summoned, and leave the protection effect as its detach effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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