Jackson Tricks Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 3 level 8 monsters This card can't attack your opponent directly. This card is unaffected by card effects as long as this card has Xyz materials. Whenever this card has no Xyz materials, target three cards your opponent controls and attach them to this card as Xyz materials. Detach two Xyz material to activate one of these effects (You can only use one of these effects once per turn): * Once per turn: Target one monster your opponent controls, destroy all other monsters your opponent controls. If it's the only monster your opponent controls, destroy it, your opponent takes damage equal to its original ATK points * Once per turn: Destroy all spell/trap cards your opponent controls, gain life points equal to the total number of cards destroyed X200 * Negate the effects of all cards your opponent controls until the end of your battle phase I fixed this card's effect and changed its type. I hope this card is balanced enough. What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Dr Professor Spaz Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 For those of us who don't have 20-10 vision, I suggest you post the lore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Tricks Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 OK, lore posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delibirb Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Repaired OCG: This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card with Xyz Material is unaffected by other card effects. You can detach 1 Xyz Material to activate 1 of the following effects (You can only activate 1 effect of "Number 77: Justice, Judge of Honors" per turn, and only once that turn): *Target 1 monster your opponent controls; destroy all other monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the combined ATK of those monsters on the field. If no monsters are destroyed by this effect: destroy the targeted monster and inflict damage to your opponent equal to its ATK on the field. *Destroy all Spell/Trap cards your opponent controls; gain 200 Life Points for each card destroyed this way. *Negate the effects of all face-up cards your opponent controls, until the end of the Battle Phase. It is a bit better than the first one, but it does too much for such a small, however giving it any other combination of these effects would make it far too outclassed to be worth the effort. I would suggest making the cost more expensive, either by requiring 2 detaches, or some life points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raymond Grover Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 a decent card, you should look for some sort of card art tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Tricks Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 a decent card, you should look for some sort of card art tho Well I would like the monster to look like Justice, except I want him to look like a judge with a blindfold (the blindfold is the number's location), and he would be wearing a suit with a peaked lapel and the vent goes halfway down his legs and have six angel wings. Repaired OCG: It is a bit better than the first one, but it does too much for such a small, however giving it any other combination of these effects would make it far too outclassed to be worth the effort. I would suggest making the cost more expensive, either by requiring 2 detaches, or some life points. Well if it'll require two detaches then I'll have to add an Xyz material reload effect. Do you think that sounds good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delibirb Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Well I would like the monster to look like Justice, except I want him to look like a judge with a blindfold (the blindfold is the number's location), and he would be wearing a suit with a peaked lapel and the vent goes halfway down his legs and have six angel wings. Well if it'll require two detaches then I'll have to add an Xyz material reload effect. Do you think that sounds good? But you dont have to. If someone wants to use two of its effects they'll need to run other cards to reload it. Like S.H.ARK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Tricks Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 But you dont have to. If someone wants to use two of its effects they'll need to run other cards to reload it. Like S.H.ARK Also like Dyson Sphere, and like S.H.DARK. I think I have an idea that no one has tried before; using any destroyed monster as Xyz material, whether it's destroyed by battle or by card effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delibirb Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Also like Dyson Sphere, and like S.H.DARK. I think I have an idea that no one has tried before; using any destroyed monster as Xyz material, whether it's destroyed by battle or by card effect. Dyson Sphere doesnt have 3 effects, and S.H.DARK is a Number C who also doesn't have 3 effects. Also, using destroyed monsters would be madness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Tricks Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Dyson Sphere doesnt have 3 effects, and S.H.DARK is a Number C who also doesn't have 3 effects. Also, using destroyed monsters would be madness. OK, how about Justice uses only the monsters he destroys as Xyz materials? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delibirb Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 OK, how about Justice uses only the monsters he destroys as Xyz materials? In my opinion, no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Tricks Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 In my opinion, no. well it's a good way to reload considering he has to pay two Xyz materials to activate his effects, the lowest I can get the reload effect is either he attaches monsters he destroys with his card effects or attaches monsters he destroys by battle. Plus it's just monster cards, I didn't add "this card attaches all cards it destroys as Xyz materials" to his effects, that would be crazy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delibirb Posted February 21, 2014 Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Its still crazy, but if you dont want the advice, have at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackson Tricks Posted February 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2014 Its still crazy, but if you dont want the advice, have at it. I do want the advice, I'm just tossing ideas back and forth. You know what, the monster run effect you mentioned should be good enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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