djono23 Posted March 6, 2014 Report Share Posted March 6, 2014 Hi everyone, this is my first post. What do you guys think of the card I've created? I'd like some opinionated feedback. This is my own version of what if Lightning as the savior would be like as a card. Hope you all like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
death00 Posted March 6, 2014 Report Share Posted March 6, 2014 where's the ritual spell? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djono23 Posted March 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2014 Ritual spell Card "Saviors Light" coming soon, as well as the field spell Yggdrasil's Tree: The Ark. More Characters coming soon. The next cards will be Caius Ballad and Lightning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted March 7, 2014 Report Share Posted March 7, 2014 If you're going to post something that needs interaction with other custom cards, it would be very helpful if you posted those custom cards as well so that we can make an effective review over how easy it is to use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djono23 Posted March 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2014 I will do that, thanks for the info and opinion. Apologies for the confusion. I'm still new at this, haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djono23 Posted March 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2014 Here is the ritual spell card. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted March 7, 2014 Report Share Posted March 7, 2014 So is there another Lightning card that you have to tribute? Or do you tribute the Ritual Monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djono23 Posted March 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2014 There is another Lightning card on the way. Currently in the works. It will be released in my next card post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djono23 Posted March 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2014 Here is the Lightning card. If there are any questions or opinions please ask or tell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted March 8, 2014 Report Share Posted March 8, 2014 Now that we have the full set, time for me to work on the lore again. [spoiler Lightning]This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it become an Effect Monster with this effect. *When this card attacks an opponent's monster, it loses decreases its attack by 400 ATK points. If this monster is attacked by an opponent's monster, When your opponent target this card for an attack: You can target the attacking monster; negate the that monsters attack for that turn. This effect lasts as long as this card is remains on the field as an Effect Monster.[/spoiler] Unlimited attack negations? I think you missed a "Once per turn" clause somewhere. Also, as it stands the ATK loss when it attacks an opponent's monster is permanent. Maybe you missed out a "during damage calculation" clause? [spoiler Savior's Light]This ritual spell card is used to special Ritual Summon "Lightning: The Savior". You must also Tribute, from your hand or field, have "Lightning" and 1 Level 5 or higher monster or higher as Tributes.[/spoiler] [spoiler Lightning: The Savior]You can Ritual Summon this card can only be special summoned with the ritual spell card "Savior's Light". Must have Lightning as one of the tributes along with one level 5 monster or higher. This card gains 500 attack points for every When a monster is destroyed by battle: This card gains 500 ATK. For every When a monster is sent to the Graveyard: You gain an additional 500 Life Points. These effects are can only be activated active if there is a face-up field spell "Yggdrasil Tree: The Ark" is in play.[/spoiler] Alright, perhaps I spoke too soon. We're still missing Yggdrasil. Anyway, it's still a convoluted Ritual Summon with particularly specific Tribute specifications, and is a vanilla 3000/2500 without a certain Field Spell. And with the Field Spell face-up, its effects are... potent, but don't quite match up to the effort needed for its Summon. Honestly, I'd rather have Lightning the Savior be a Fusion monster, considering the material requirements. It reduces the number of specific cards you need to draw into. Will Yggdrasil Tree make it worth playing...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djono23 Posted March 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2014 The current cards above will be re-worked. I will be making a few adjustments to correct a few errors. The cards will be reposted later along with a new Field Spell: Yggdrasil Tree: The Ark The card posts above will be deleted once the newer set has been made. I will keep the cards above up for anyone else's opinion they might want to add. This post goes to everyone viewing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted March 9, 2014 Report Share Posted March 9, 2014 These belong in Pop Culture by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djono23 Posted March 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2014 I need a little help. I'm trying to release a new set of cards but the "attach image" section keeps saying that the file is too big. Can anybody help with this problem? It was working just fine until now. I'm only importing one picture at a time. Is there a way to shrink this size of the image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted March 13, 2014 Report Share Posted March 13, 2014 I need a little help. I'm trying to release a new set of cards but the "attach image" section keeps saying that the file is too big. Can anybody help with this problem? It was working just fine until now. I'm only importing one picture at a time. Is there a way to shrink this size of the image? Do not attach images. Instead, from the card maker, click on the generated card image. A url with img tags will appear. Copy all of that and put it directly into your post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djono23 Posted March 13, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2014 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djono23 Posted March 14, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2014 Hello everyone, apologies for the long wait on my updated cards. I have made changes to these cards and I thought these changes were really good. I think they are fair enough, maybe not perfect, but hey it's called learning. Ha, Anyway the cards will be posted today or tomorrow, depending. I will be posting the following cards: The first one is Lightning: Gaurdian Core, Lightning: Etro's Champion, Lightning: The Savior, and lastly Yggdrasil Tree: The Ark. -It's up to the duelist to find holes in an opponent's cards and playing style. That is what a "challenge" in dueling means to me. It's no fun having no challenge "putting bans on majority of the official cards in real time and in the games", but it is unfair to spam a card effect that guarantees a person victory on the first turn. If that all made sense. Equal opportunity in a free flowing duel is a challenge itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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