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Arrival of the Hellspawns Pt 2


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Nice cards!
Where do you get those images from that you use anyway?

Also, i think you shouldn't make a new topic everytime you finish 2 cards. Instead, post them in the same topic as it already was in, and maybe bump (don't know the bump rule tbh)

Tuner first:
I suggest some changes in his effect.
I would change it from "You can discard this card & add 1 "Hellspawn" card from your Deck to your hand." to "You can discard this card to add 1 "Hellspawn" card from your Deck to your hand.
Also, he can discard himself to get another copy of himself to your hand, this might be something to check out.

As for the second tuner (the fiend):
You can use its effect unlimited times a turn, and you can use multiple copies at once.
This could enable you to summon 2 or 3 XYZ monsters in 1 turn, allowing it to be used for means you probably don't want it to be used for.
My advice is to make it unable to send himself to the Graveyard, and to add a line where his effect can be used once per turn.

Great cards in generals, need some fixing, 7/10

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You know, it would actually be a little easier to just make all your Hellspawn cards in a single topic, and just bump it whenever you add to it.
That aside, Lost Soul is questionable, in the sense that, I assume this Deck is Graveyard-based, and that it would easily be abusive with things like Dark Armed Dragon and/or Caius. Assuming, of course, the rest of your Hellspawns are DARK, and Cerberus is just a 1-off FIRE monster.

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