avariademon Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 ok hopefully this time i got it, any how now i know that the image is horid, please dont tell me this because i already know, there are probably plenty of wording problems but thats one of the reasons that i brought it here im concerned about both rating and fixing if you could help me fix it i will post the finnal version also if you know of a picture that could make this better im all ears. now without further adue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 - Take control- you are spelling field wrong.Im sure someone will help with the wording of the card soon enough. Good effort :)7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 Well, I was going to suggest a way to rewrite the effect to be much clearer, but then I remembered that there was a real card that was almost exactly like this (except it's a continuous trap instead of an equip spell). So, if you want advice on how to word your card, look at this card: Brainwashing Beam Otherwise, a fairly good card (even if it's not entirely original :P). overall - 12.11/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 Well' date=' I was going to suggest a way to rewrite the effect to be much clearer, but then I remembered that there was a real card that was almost exactly like this (except it's a continuous trap instead of an equip spell). So, if you want advice on how to word your card, look at this card: Brainwashing Beam Otherwise, a fairly good card (even if it's not entirely original :P). overall - 12.11/13.69 ^_^ A 12.11/13.69? It has errors and mistakes! 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 Bad PictureOCG errors - Take control- field- cannot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 A 12.11/13.69? It has errors and mistakes! 5/10 Whoops, I think I'm backwards this morning :P I meant 11.21/13.69 Thanks for pointing it out ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted March 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 well my spelling is horid to the max so yeah, and i understand its not COMPLETLY original but i cant really come up with my own cards here i will edit it and replace the card in a few minutes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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