MetAtemu Posted March 22, 2014 Report Share Posted March 22, 2014 grunt angel #1 if oppents have no light monsters on the side can attack directly treated as a "Grunt Angel" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted March 22, 2014 Report Share Posted March 22, 2014 Lore fixing. If your opponent controls have no face-up LIGHT monsters, this card on the side can attack your opponent directly. This card's name becomes treated as a "Grunt Angel" while it is on the field. As it stands right now, this is relatively average. Good stats with a generic effect. Under realistic types, there's only Warrior or Winged Beast types. Or perhaps you were looking for Fairy? I presume there will be some more cards that affect and support "Grunt Angel"s. Can't wait to see the rest of them so I can evaluate them at their fullest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetAtemu Posted March 23, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2014 Lore fixing. As it stands right now, this is relatively average. Good stats with a generic effect. Under realistic types, there's only Warrior or Winged Beast types. Or perhaps you were looking for Fairy? I presume there will be some more cards that affect and support "Grunt Angel"s. Can't wait to see the rest of them so I can evaluate them at their fullest. yes, an thank you. i'm woking on more. i guess the card is not a master piese yet ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetAtemu Posted March 23, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2014 i edited it water is next Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetAtemu Posted March 23, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2014 a quicky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted March 23, 2014 Report Share Posted March 23, 2014 Based on the lacking text on Seth's Pendent (sic), I have zero idea on what it's supposed to do. Does it create a Dragon Token? Does it become a Dragon-Type monster? Or does the equipped monster become a Dragon and gain those stats? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetAtemu Posted March 23, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2014 i worked on it this moring. ithe equiped bcome a dragon type, the toke idea sounds go too ill thing about that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gregory the Gregory Posted March 23, 2014 Report Share Posted March 23, 2014 That was almost english! *claps* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetAtemu Posted March 23, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2014 *laughs* thank you hopful finshed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetAtemu Posted March 23, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2014 here is white maiden Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted March 24, 2014 Report Share Posted March 24, 2014 Alright, it's pretty evident that English is not your main language. I'll calm down... now, let's work on the cards. Change Grunt Angel #1 to a Fairy-Type monster. [spoiler Seth's Pendant]The equipped monster gains 1000 ATK and DEF, and also becomes Dragon-Type. attck: 1000 defents: 1000[/spoiler] [spoiler Chi of Blood][Warrior/Effect]If a monster you control is destroyed by battle: dies, You can target the attacking monster; Special Summon this card from your hand, and if you do, destroy that target, and inflict damage to its owner equal to attcks attcker dies. half its ATK. the attck flicded to owner[/spoiler] One does not simply create a Spirit monster without including the rest of the effects common to Spirits. Change this to an Effect monster. [spoiler White Maiden][Spellcaster/Effect]If this card is targeted for an attacked: You the controler can Special Summon 1 "Guarden" monster from your hand.[/spoiler] I'm going to assume you can only Special Summon "Guarden" (sic) monsters from your hand. Correct me if I'm mistaken. Now, about how unreadable your cards are... Perhaps you might want to reference other cards with similar effects to understand the sentence structures they use? Or, to put it in words you might understand: sentnce nt finsh see propr card copy write style bettr spell bettr gramar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetAtemu Posted March 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2014 S Dark Slayer -no effect- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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