adamForEva Posted May 4, 2014 Report Share Posted May 4, 2014 First card, hope you enjoy, tell me if this card is too weak or too strong, and if any OCG fixes are needed. Thanks (If your wondering why I added the life point increase, I don't really know, I thought it might be too strong without.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 4, 2014 Report Share Posted May 4, 2014 No need to attach images. When you generate the card in the maker, click on the card image. A link should appear with img tags. Copy and paste all of it into your post. Lore fix: Target 3 Set cards; on the field. until the End Phase of your turn, if 1 of those targets card is destroyed, flipped face up, or removed from leaves the field, destroy the other targets, then two. If a card is destroyed by this card's effect, their controller of that card gains 500 Life Points. The 500 LP gain, being a one-off instance, is relatively insignificant. Including it or not doesn't change how strong it would be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adamForEva Posted May 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2014 For the lore fix, I like everything until "then their controller gains" It's not that the OCG is wrong, its that I want it to be like "for each card" or if the "other targets" are each on separate sides of the field, their respective controllers receive the effect. I'm also considering having there be no gain or loss of life point effect. And I'll be sure to use the image link next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adamForEva Posted May 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2014 Okay I guess I have my final card: http://i.imgur.com/X8d3RubB.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 4, 2014 Report Share Posted May 4, 2014 Please include all the img tags you get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adamForEva Posted May 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2014 Link doesn't work, screw it Wait what? It only gave me 1 link when I clicked on my generated picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adamForEva Posted May 4, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2014 Is this better? http://i.imgur.com/6mPMAab.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 5, 2014 Report Share Posted May 5, 2014 When you include the [/img], don't forget the [img] that needs to come at the front of the link. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted May 5, 2014 Report Share Posted May 5, 2014 It's a fine card. You can use it as Chain Whirlwind, and if one of the targets is activated in response, it would leave the field after this resolves and blow up the other cards. I think. I'm not sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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