Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted May 8, 2014 Report Share Posted May 8, 2014 [spoiler=Xolotl's Lore (in case you can't read it on the card)]3 Level 10 monsters Must be Xyz Summoned, and cannot be Summoned by other ways. If you use an "Earthbound Immortal" monster you control as an Xyz Material for the Xyz Summon of this card: You can use up to 2 Level 10 monsters in your hand or Deck as the other Xyz Material. If a player shifts control of this face-up card away from its owner: That player loses the Duel. If this card has an "Earthbound Immortal" monster as an Xyz Material: Its ATK and DEF are multiplied by the number of Xyz Materials attached to it. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card: Destroy this card. Your opponent cannot attack this face-up card. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Once per turn, during each player's turns, if your opponent would Summon a monster or activate a card effect on the field: You can detach 1 Xyz Materials from this card; negate that Summon or effect, and if you do, destroy and banish the card.[/spoiler] So... yeah, this is supposed to be the final boss of a Yugioh RP/fanfic that I'm considering about making, and as such, I'm treading a rather fine line over [acronym='well, clearly I can't have too much, cause being OP'ed isn't cool by any standards']exactly how much power[/acronym] I want this card to have. Of course, it's much easier to drop if you already control an EBI, because... let's face it, ease of summon is everything nowadays, and it's better to use an EBI anyway since that's the only way its stat multiplication effect will kick in. The "whoever shifts control from owner loses" effect is a plot device over anything else, and is overall no more practical than "control cannot switch", but I just like the former more. It's main effect is there to negate anything that can directly threaten it or the field card it needs to stay alive, [acronym='unless of course you used just the 3 normal level 10s on the field, which is stupid cause then it wouldn't have a lot of power to begin with']though it does take a chunk out of its stats[/acronym]. On top of that, it can only be used once per turn for balance's sake, and since it destroys as well as banishes, stuff like Stardust Dragon and Safe Zone can still stop it from working as planned. The fact that it banishes is still a thing that I've considered scaling down, but I'd rather not do it unless I have to, considering that the Graveyard's so plentifully accessible nowadays. And there you have it; my final boss EBI card. Constructive critiques are welcome as always. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted May 10, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 10, 2014 Um... BUMP? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted May 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 BUMP... again <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted May 17, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2014 I dunno what the hell is wrong with you people... but BUMP <_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted May 17, 2014 Report Share Posted May 17, 2014 The card has 5100ATK if I understand that correctly, and can attack your opponent directly while also negating effects? That card is broken, mate, especially if 2 of the 3 materials can be from the Deck. Definitely suggest either the straying of direct attack/cannot be attacked effect of EBI (keeping Field reliance) or nerf the hell out of the negate and attack effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 17, 2014 Report Share Posted May 17, 2014 3 Level 10 monsters Must be Xyz Summoned, and cannot be Summoned by other ways. If you use an "Earthbound Immortal" monster you control as an Xyz Material for the Xyz Summon of this card: You can use up to 2 Level 10 monsters in your hand or Deck as the other Xyz Material. If a player shifts control of this face-up card changes due to a card effect away from its owner: The controller of that card effect player loses the Duel. If this card has an "Earthbound Immortal" monster as an Xyz Material: Its ATK and DEF are multiplied by the number of Xyz Materials attached to it. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot attack target this face-up card for attacks. This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Once per turn, during each either player's turns, if your opponent would Summon a monster or activate a card effect on the field: You can detach 1 Xyz Materials from this card; negate that Summon or effect, and if you do, destroy and banish the card. The first problem with this card is how it interacts with the field-unique clause on the Earthbound Immortals. Without negating their effects, it cannot be Xyz Summoned while there's an Earthbound Immortal anywhere on the field, even if it's under your control and you plan to use it as the Xyz Material. Also, the innate unattackability of this card makes the ATK drop irrelevant when the Xyz Materials are being detached for its free Solemns. The difference between 5100 and 3400 damage from a direct attack is largely insignificant - it's still massive, and your opponent will drop dead in the next hit under normal circumstances. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral_Stalfos19 Posted May 18, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2014 OK, so I'll have to... Correct the OCG Deal with the EBI clause Give the so called "free Solemn Judgments" a good cost. I'll work on those when I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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