Ooky Spooky its another DARK archetype {Umbral, 11/? WARNING: ARTWORK CONTAINS GORE AND SKULLS}

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Main Deck Monsters:



Lore:
Once per turn: you can discard one card to the Graveyard to Special Summon one Level 4 DARK Fiend-Type monster from the Graveyard; its ATK and DEF are halved. If this card is in the Graveyard and you control no monsters: you can banish one DARK monster to Special Summon this card.



Lore:
Once per turn: you can discard 1 card; destroy one Spell/Trap card on the field. If this card would be destroyed by battle or card effect: you can banish one DARK monster from your Graveyard; this card is not destroyed.



Lore:
If this card is discarded to the Graveyard: draw one card. if the card drawn by the card's effect is a DARK monster: you can discard it; draw another card. You cannot Special Summon the turn you activate this effect. If this card is banished from the Graveyard: you can Special Summon this card; its ATK and DEF become 0.



Lore:
When this card is discarded to the Graveyard: you can add one Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your deck to your hand. If this card is banished from the Graveyard: you can discard one card; Special Summon this card.



Lore:
Once per turn: you can banish one card from your Graveyard; return one card from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is destroyed by battle: you can discard one card to the Graveyard; destroy the monster that destroyed this card.



Lore:
When this card is discarded from the hand to the Graveyard: you can Special Summon this card; this card cannot be used as Xyz material the turn it is Special Summoned by its own effect. Once per turn: you can discard one card; this card cannot be destroyed by card effects until the End Phase. if this card is banished from the field: you can discard one card; add this card to your hand.

Spell Cards:



Lore:
Activae only while you control 3 or more "Umbral" monsters: banish any amount of cards from your Graveyard; destroy cards on the field equal to the number of cards banished.



Lore:
Activate only while you control a face-up Fiend-Type monster: Special Summon one Level 4 Fiend-Type monster from your deck; it cannot attack this turn or be used as Synchro or Xyz Material this turn.



Lore:
DARK monsters gain 300 ATK and DEF. Once per turn: you can discard one card to make your opponent discard one random card; you cannot Special Summon the turn you activate this effect.

Extra Deck Monsters:



Lore:
2 Level 4 Fiend-Type monsters
While this card has Xyz Material: your opponent must discard one card to the Graveyard to declare an attack. Once per turn: you can detach one Xyz Material from this card and discard one card to target one Level 3 or lower DARK monster; that monster can attack your opponent directly this turn.



Lore:
2 Level 3 DARK monsters
Once per turn: you can discard one card and detach one Xyz Material from this card; banish one card from either player's Graveyard. When this card destroys a monster by battle while your opponent controls another monster: this card can attack once again in a row.

All of the artwork for these cards were originally made by fleshgoredon at deviantart (I edited them)

CnC would be rad.

EDIT: Fixed the effect of Corpse Pixie, Demonic Budding, and One Tree Hill.

EDIT 2: fixed Greed Prince.

EDIT 3: The Final Battle: Fixed Abomination.

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Bumpity Bump

[rydersilver]

I like the concept behind this deck, and i could see it as fun, but Umm well some of these cards are very broken and i know i would abuse them in other decks..would make chaos so good

You have to consider that these cards wouldnt just be used here (and this could be a broken deck).

When you have one cards cost became a plus when combined with other effects, loops and too easy of plusses can occur

 

like for example, prince enables free plusses and rank 4s to no end

Theres about 340 targets for pixies eff

 

Also you need to specify for this effect, where the ss occurs from. Also its a very strong card. Hell adding one to hand is very strong and unoriginal "Activate only while you control a face-up Fiend-Type monster: Special Summon one Level 4 Fiend-Type monster; it cannot attack this turn or be used as Synchro or Xyz Material this turn. "

 

One tree hill is broken, and you plus from it

 

The artworks gross why would you want that 

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I like the concept behind this deck, and i could see it as fun, but Umm well some of these cards are very broken and i know i would abuse them in other decks..would make chaos so good
You have to consider that these cards wouldnt just be used here (and this could be a broken deck).
When you have one cards cost became a plus when combined with other effects, loops and too easy of plusses can occur

like for example, prince enables free plusses and rank 4s to no end
Theres about 340 targets for pixies eff

Also you need to specify for this effect, where the ss occurs from. Also its a very strong card. Hell adding one to hand is very strong and unoriginal "Activate only while you control a face-up Fiend-Type monster: Special Summon one Level 4 Fiend-Type monster; it cannot attack this turn or be used as Synchro or Xyz Material this turn. "

One tree hill is broken, and you plus from it

The artworks gross why would you want that

Yeah looking back I can see what you mean. Thanks for the Critique of the mute easily abused cards! I'll try and fix them soon. Also the artwork is intentionally gross. I needed something dark and macabre so I for something dark and macabre.

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Bump because it's not like i like you out anytHing.

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Bump up the thread it up it up.

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Bump

[Plaidbang809]

The Umbral Abomination has no means of detaching XYZ Material, I think it would be fair if you detached an XYZ material to activate it's effect, instead of discarding a card. 

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The Umbral Abomination has no means of detaching XYZ Material, I think it would be fair if you detached an XYZ material to activate it's effect, instead of discarding a card.

Oh shoot you're right. I'll fix that pronto.

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It's the final bump now (na na na naaaaaaaa, na na na na na)

[Feartheghost]

I feel you should change the effect of Pixie to add a level 4 or lower "Umbral" monster instead of a Dark Fiend-Type.

 

Also, I would like to say the effects of Beast and Spirit won't activate when discarded as a cost, but that may have just been intentional.

 

Lastly, I feel you should look into making a trap. Maybe one that makes you discard 1 card and banish 1 card to do something?

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I feel you should change the effect of Pixie to add a level 4 or lower "Umbral" monster instead of a Dark Fiend-Type.

Also, I would like to say the effects of Beast and Spirit won't activate when discarded as a cost, but that may have just been intentional.

Lastly, I feel you should look into making a trap. Maybe one that makes you discard 1 card and banish 1 card to do something?

Thanks for the suggestions. Also hOw would Beast and Spirit not work? I tried to make them line the fableds, who gain advantage from any discard. Did I not word out right?

[Feartheghost]

Thanks for the suggestions. Also hOw would Beast and Spirit not work? I tried to make them line the fableds, who gain advantage from any discard. Did I not word out right?

You would want to put a comma instead of a ":" to make it all one effect. The way it's worded now it's a condition that must be met and cannot be fulfilled as a cost.

 

An example is the effect of Fabled Cerburrel:

[spoiler='Lore']When this card is discarded to the Graveyard, Special Summon it.[/spoiler]

[Blue Cow]

You need to change the artwork. Bear in mind it's marketed as a 6+ game. It shouldn't be in realistic if it would be censored. (i'm not hating but they would not be published).

 

Other than that the set looks ok but some cards might be a bit op if they were put in other decks.