Careless Whisper Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 Alright, I just can't hold in the urge anymore, I had to make it...I know, I'm very stupid, you're probably thinking, "Wow, what a moron, this kid actually made a Dark version of the Felgrand Dragon." Well, I made it, and I'm very happy to have made it too. I know, the Picture is overused, but I couldn't find a better one. ******************************************[align=center]Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending from the field to the Graveyard 3 "Felgrand Dragon" from your side of the field. When this card is Special Summoned, select 2 monsters from either your's or your opponent's Graveyards, increase the ATK and DEF of this card equal to the total level of the selected 2 monsters x300. When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon 3 "Felgrand Dragon" from your Graveyard in face-up attack position. [/align] disclaimer: http://pamansazz.deviantart.com/art/Dark-Dragon-79220895 Please rate and comment, I spent along time with this, and I want it to be worth it...If I have any OCG errors, pls do me a favor and show me the correct way to word it. I wasn't exactly sure if I worded the effect correctly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 I like the pic. It seems like it would be tough to summon. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 Very hard to play... Although it can be done with staunch defender + Decoy + 3 felgrands. Good job on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted March 22, 2008 Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 I like it tho I used the pic for my "Legendary Armor Dragon" but it is fine and could be tough to summon tho I still like it 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2008 Yea, it's pretty hard to summon alright, I tried to make it as balenced as possible. One of the good things about this card. Is that when it's destroyed, you get 3 Felgrands back from the grave, use their effects to select him, and all three of them gain a total of 2000 ATK each, so there's 3 dragons on your side of the field with 4800 ATK. so you have atleast a total firepower of 14400 ATK, would suck if your opponent used mirror force or Magic Cylinder. Though, I bet your opponent would rather use Mirror Force to destroy the Dark Felgrand, but then he has 3 4800 ATK Felgrands to worry about then, the opponent's only way out it to try to stop the battle phase, there are gonna be too many monsters to defend again, so I could only think of one thing to save him agains it, "Negate Attack." if there are anymore card to stop a battle phase, do tell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 awesome idea! like exodia with attack points, though. Only problems are there are bad things that happen with that sort of thing. Imagine Magic Cylinder -- immediate reversal and you lose. Or draining sheild, enchanted javelin, physical double, all these cards made to counter monsters with high attack and strategies that rely on those monster. Attack won't cut it because the situation is too easily turned around or exploited. Just think:1. Ultimate Offering (that thing: 500 Points for another summon)2. Felgrand3. Creature Swap4. 3 Neo-Spacien Dark Panthers (1500 LP) -- use effect5. Dark Felgrand w/minimum of 6300 ATK Points, though probably more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilly white Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 okay i could find a few OCG errors but its a nice card7.5/10 The error's i think i saw where:set must be SetThis card can only be Special Summoned by sending from the field to the Graveyard 3 "Felgrand Dragon"s from your side of the field Should be This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 3 ''Felgrand Dragon'' from your side of the field to the Graveyard. Ehhh maybe i saw a few others but i don't know myself sure how to write them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 EDIT FIRST POST: Thank you for the replies. I know, this card is easily counterable. I have fixed the OCG errors that were pointed out, if there are anymore that you find, please tell me, and I will fix them as soon as I can. -The Captain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 It's okay3.75/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Well, I sort of made this card for my Role-Play character, Sario Ojima. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 "Felgrand Dragons" from your side of the field to the Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, select 2 monsters from either you or your opponent's Graveyard, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by an amount equal to the total level of the selected monsters x300. When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon 3 "Felgrand Dragons" from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position.Umm... I think that's all.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 "Felgrand Dragons" from your side of the field to the Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' select 2 monsters from either you or your opponent's Graveyard, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by an amount equal to the total level of the selected monsters x300. When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon 3 "Felgrand Dragons" from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position.Umm... I think that's all.8/10[/quote'] Sorry dude, but I don't think that's right. when you write in another card's name you have to put the ACTUAL card name in quotations. you cannot add an "s" with it. Thank you for trying though, but I feel like the OCG is fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HMNISGwahahaha Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 "Felgrand Dragons" from your side of the field to the Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned' date=' select 2 monsters from either you or your opponent's Graveyard, increase the ATK and DEF of this card by an amount equal to the total level of the selected monsters x300. When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon 3 "Felgrand Dragons" from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position.Umm... I think that's all.8/10[/quote'] Sorry dude, but I don't think that's right. when you write in another card's name you have to put the ACTUAL card name in quotations. you cannot add an "s" with it. Thank you for trying though, but I feel like the OCG is fixed.Some cards contain "S" in the actual names. (Older ones) But, I fixed the rest. Oh well, If you don't want to change it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Well, those are older cards, the OCG has changed over the years. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 I think I'll bump this thread sense Kizzi made a Dark Felgrand as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 It's pretty good, but it's more of an "Ultimate Felgrand" than a Dark Counterpart. Dark Counterparts are usually the same stats and support Dark monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 i dont know what to say......... all i know is that i would never buy this card if it came out in tcg..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Meh. Hard to Summon. That's true. But from that point on the card is very much so broken. Still, it's an interesting effect. I believe including 3 Felgrand Dragon was not necessary and 1 + another restriction would have sufficed. Nevertheless, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Yeah, that's why I said that Kizzi's is muich better... But, yet, I only made mine for my RP character's deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Hard to summon, but still very nice. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Kizzi's is good, despite his minor OCG error. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 So, than what do you say about mine? This thread isn't Kizzi's thread, this one is mine.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Ok, I was gettin' to that...I think it's a little underpowered. I'd suggest making the tribute cost 3 Level 7 or higher dragon-type monsters and reviving up to 3 Felgrand Dragons upon removal. Just so that the user has a chance of summoning it, 3 Felgrands is a little steep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.