Brezovsky_adam Posted May 31, 2014 Report Share Posted May 31, 2014 Alright i've read the realistic card guide thingy so hopefully i'm doing this thread right as it's my first time doing this. anyway please review my card and tell me if it needs a bit of tuning ^^ 3 level 1 zombie type monsters This card gains 300 def for each "skull servant" in the graveyard. once per turn, you can detach one xyz material: send 1 zombie type monster from the deck to the grave to special summon 1 zombie type monster from the grave with def equal to or less than "Queen of the Skull Servants" hopefully this card isint too op :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EPTinYugi Posted May 31, 2014 Report Share Posted May 31, 2014 3 level Level 1 zombie type Zombie-Type monsters This card gains 300 def DEF for each "skull servant" "Skull Servant" cards in the graveyard. once Once per turn: you You can detach one xyz material; send 1 zombie type Zombie-Type monster from the deck Deck to the grave Graveyard to special summon Special Summon 1 zombie type Zombie-Type monster from the grave Graveyard with def DEF equal to or less than "Queen of the Skull Servants." hopefully this card isint too op :P I corrected the ones crossed with the bolded words. I wouldn't say it's too OP but it might be a good idea to increase the gains to more than 300; I don't know how fast a Skull Servant Deck is, so it might be good there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darthakin Posted June 1, 2014 Report Share Posted June 1, 2014 They tend to be fast. Anyways I think this card's values are right as they should be, nice one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted June 1, 2014 Report Share Posted June 1, 2014 So the milling of the Zombie is not part of the cost of that effect, and it doesn't target the revival subject? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brezovsky_adam Posted June 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2014 So the milling of the Zombie is not part of the cost of that effect, and it doesn't target the revival subject? Actually I meant the revival to be targeted my bad Dx and yeah the milling of the zombie is the cost. I corrected the ones crossed with the bolded words. I wouldn't say it's too OP but it might be a good idea to increase the gains to more than 300; I don't know how fast a Skull Servant Deck is, so it might be good there. Well my skull servant deck usually has about 4-6 in the grave on average and is pretty consistent. Plus with wight prince coming out, it'll help mill faster. Most zombies have low def so I thought tht her def shouldn't be that high :p but maybe I should raise it to 400? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armoire Posted June 1, 2014 Report Share Posted June 1, 2014 I'm surprised she doesn't have the "This card's name becomes "Skull Servant" while it is in the Graveyard." effect, since she's related to the Wight cards. Well my skull servant deck usually has about 4-6 in the grave on average and is pretty consistent. Plus with wight prince coming out, it'll help mill faster. Most zombies have low def so I thought tht her def shouldn't be that high :P but maybe I should raise it to 400? 400, I think, is perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brezovsky_adam Posted June 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2014 I'm surprised she doesn't have the "This card's name becomes "Skull Servant" while it is in the Graveyard." effect, since she's related to the Wight cards. 400, I think, is perfect. -face palm- I knew I forgot to add something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted June 2, 2014 Report Share Posted June 2, 2014 Actually I meant the revival to be targeted my bad Dx and yeah the milling of the zombie is the cost. Then, let me correct the lore... 3 Level 1 Zombie-Type monsters This card's name becomes "Skull Servant" while it is in the Graveyard. This card gains 300 DEF for each "Skull Servant" card in the your Graveyard. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, target 1 send 1 zombie type monster from the deck to the grave to special summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from the in a Graveyard with DEF equal to or less than this card's DEF, then send 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard; Special Summon that target "Queen of the Skull Servants" All costs and targets fit in between the colon and the semicolon. I've specifically worded this to ensure that you can't target the same monster you milled - your target has to be declared before you mill. I've also forced this card to check only your Graveyard for its DEF calculation, but its revival effect is free to snatch up Zombies from the opponent's Graveyard, because that's how some Zombie strategies roll. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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