alberthk Posted June 9, 2014 Report Share Posted June 9, 2014 My next creation. Critics and suggestions are very much appreciated. I am still learning on using the new OCG, I hope I did well. Thanks for the artist who made this picture. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BleuConviction Posted June 9, 2014 Report Share Posted June 9, 2014 Looks to be a useful tech card. I'd like to set this when my opponent controls Black Luster Soldier fufufu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted June 9, 2014 Report Share Posted June 9, 2014 I normally lead my posts by editing any card texts to be in line with PSCT. But you've more or less got a good grasp on it. A single capitalization error (no capitals after the semicolon), but I'll let that go. Overwriting card effects is actually a pretty interesting thing to do. That threatening boss monster who could kick your ass? Scrub everything off its little text box and basically neuter it. Reminds me of Darksteel Mutation and various other cards in MtG that love to scrub effects off their targets. Thing is, this card scrubs the monster's text box indefinitely. That's pushing the envelope a little. It would be better if you could give it a duration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BleuConviction Posted June 9, 2014 Report Share Posted June 9, 2014 Thing is, this card scrubs the monster's text box indefinitely. That's pushing the envelope a little. It would be better if you could give it a duration.Well, you have to attack and destroy it for the effect to activate, so it's your opponents fault that they just rendered their monster useless. This is pretty much a fiendish chain except you have to waste a Set/Summon which makes up for the fact that after the effect resolves your opponent can't get rid of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alberthk Posted June 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2014 Looks to be a useful tech card. I'd like to set this when my opponent controls Black Luster Soldier fufufu. lol, zero. your signature's gif probably reflects your personality. haha I normally lead my posts by editing any card texts to be in line with PSCT. But you've more or less got a good grasp on it. A single capitalization error (no capitals after the semicolon), but I'll let that go. Overwriting card effects is actually a pretty interesting thing to do. That threatening boss monster who could kick your ass? Scrub everything off its little text box and basically neuter it. Reminds me of Darksteel Mutation and various other cards in MtG that love to scrub effects off their targets. Thing is, this card scrubs the monster's text box indefinitely. That's pushing the envelope a little. It would be better if you could give it a duration. Thanks Gadjiltron ( i hate this card on GBA's YuGiOh GX! )! I'm glad with your review. I've been checking the OCG Guide over and over again before making this card, lol ( I don't know about that capitalization ). Yeah, that "boss monster" reminds me of the card with a very similar name as your ID. I thought of giving limitations to the duration but remembering cards like Judgement Dragon made me glad I made the effect everlasting. hahaha :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poisoned Simochi Posted June 10, 2014 Report Share Posted June 10, 2014 Well, you have to attack and destroy it for the effect to activate, so it's your opponents fault that they just rendered their monster useless. This is pretty much a fiendish chain except you have to waste a Set/Summon which makes up for the fact that after the effect resolves your opponent can't get rid of it. Actually you only have to summon it and attack something stronger with it, thus - effect done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excalibur the Divine Posted June 10, 2014 Report Share Posted June 10, 2014 Actually you only have to summon it and attack something stronger with it, thus - effect done. Well, this card isn't op at all because you will probably take damage when you suicide your monster and paralizing potion does the same thing and fiendish chain does The same thing too but better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted June 10, 2014 Report Share Posted June 10, 2014 Well, this card isn't op at all because you will probably take damage when you suicide your monster and paralizing potion does the same thing and fiendish chain does The same thing too but better >Paralyzing Potion does the same thing HA! That old card only prevents attacks on non-Machine monsters. This card erases everything the target has and replaces it with a detrimental effect! Yes, Fiendish Chain does something similar, but Maya has the advantage over being a lingering effect that persists until the monster stops being face-up on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted June 10, 2014 Report Share Posted June 10, 2014 This has to die to trigger its effect which makes it a lot weaker than Fiendish Chain in practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.