N00B Hunter Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Made a card. Other than those god cards, this is the first real one I made (cause the baseball guy said their not real.. :(). Please tell me what to fix! [b]Demonic Exiled Force[/b] [img]http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa295/Leturnmaster/exiledforce.jpg[/img] [center]Effect: If there are no monsters on your side of the field, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you do this, skip your next Standby Phase. During your Standby Phase, remove this card from play to destroy 2 cards on the field.[/center] Original Picture From Osakis: [url]http://osakis.deviantart.com/art/E-X-I-L-E-30063066[/url] Picture on the card from: [url]http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/aa295/Leturnmaster/glass.jpg[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Five minutes is a great bump time. >_> Mystic Tomato. That is all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 it works... i guess... not bad, but not special... kudos on the balance i suppose, but mystic tomato would break this card... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted March 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Five minutes is a great bump time. >_> Mystic Tomato. That is all. sorry about the bump time... But isn't mystic tomato banned? (like witch of the black forest and sangan..?) but that makes sense, but i was thinking 1600 ATK might be too much for it. it supposed to be weak physically. i'm just not sure. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Five minutes is a great bump time. >_> Mystic Tomato. That is all. sorry about the bump time... But isn't mystic tomato banned? (like witch of the black forest and sangan..?) Witch is banned' date=' Sangan is Limited, Mystic Tomato is unlimited. but that makes sense, but i was thinking 1600 ATK might be too much for it. it supposed to be weak physically. i'm just not sure. :( Make the destruction effect not activate if it was Special Summoned by an effect other than its own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 7.5/10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wilson91 Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 Good effort, the pic is awesome. Tomato would go great with this as well. 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DAJ Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 thats a goood card good picture aswell 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted March 23, 2008 Report Share Posted March 23, 2008 I agree with Crab. There's multiple things to do to fix the Tomato problem. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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